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by bittereloquence

schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Generally, I’m not much of a fan of the Prowl x Jazz pairing (doesn’t make much sense to me, really) but I enjoyed this oneshot very much. The way you set up the relationship made it believable to me. And I love how prickish you made Prowl; reminds me of his personality in the comics. And Jazz is sexy. xD

I love how every Prowl smut puts so much emphasis on his door-wing kibbles. They’re so cute. :3

Nicely done. I especially liked how Prowl and Jazz, despite interfacing, didn’t seem to have a lick of trust for the other. Haha. Good job.
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Delicious, Absolutely delicious! I don't think I've read any of your work before - and I'm now wondering what I might have missed.

Well, another day when I need a break from my own writing endeavors - I'll go exploring through your profile!

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