rate_review Reviews

Beautiful.
Your way of writing this piece greatly reminded me of an excerpt from Soul Reaver.
The relationship between Megatron and Starscream is like that of Kain and Raziel.
Like I said.
Beautiful.

To find the words to express the raw beauty of this work of art... You have far surpassed any expectations I could have dreamed of having upon reading a story with this pairing. The way they enteract is so true to their character that you can't help but feel their relationship could be no other way. You are drawn in the story, gripped by the pieces of the puzzle falling together and taken to a place one could never have conceived of. But, you have and in so doing, I humbly admit you have proven with this story that you are in the top ranks of writers everywhere.

Wow. It took me a long time to decide whether i was traumitized or extremely interested in this story. And i have to say it was extremely interesting. I never ever would have thought of that kind of a relationship between screamer and megs. but wow, you really managed to pull it off! Congrats!

Oh and i shared this with one of my tf fan friends and she says "um....you have destroyed every last vestige of innocence left in our human bodies brought on by cartoon robots" but thats a good thing ^-^.

Keep writing such awsome work!

Mmm, they really look good together. The constant battle between them translates to almost sexual tension, which you expressed beautifully. They say that there is a thin line between love and hate, and these two teeter precariously on that line. (Of course, for Megatron and Starscream, the word "hate" seems to translate into "love", or even better, "understanding.") I really liked their conversation between the more...interesting parts, and the last line of dialogue really finished things nicely. In short, great job! I enjoyed your fic very much.

Like I stated above, this piece has endured an outburst of creativity flowing through it, and you prove to be a wonderful artist as in writing. You show true vision, as you are able to create and design a way that a whole new race has their version of sexual intercourse. If only more people in this would could have the ability to write as well as you. Hell, I wish I could write as well as you!

That was really good, once more ^^. I've read your other fics and you've outmatched yourself this time, good job.

It's wrong that Transformers sex should be so well written.

First off, let me say that I would never have thought of writing a Transfomers adult fic. True, I grew up watching the show but just. Giant robots going at it? O_o;

Although. Once you get past the intial "wtf" factor, this is extremely well written. You captured Megatron and Starscream perfectly.