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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! The whole time I was hoping Prowl would go ninja on Sent's aft. X_X;; Very good job!
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... Intense... Frightening... Repulsive in many ways.
But I assume that's exactly how you wanted us readers to feel - isn't it?
Other than that, fairly well-written. I only saw a couple typos...
But I assume that's exactly how you wanted us readers to feel - isn't it?
Other than that, fairly well-written. I only saw a couple typos...
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Technically, Sentinel owns a lance, not a sword.
We need more fics with Sentinel being an asshole, one way or another. It;s kinda hard to believe he could totally break Prowl like that though. Still, it's pretty good entertainment for a half-hour or so.
We need more fics with Sentinel being an asshole, one way or another. It;s kinda hard to believe he could totally break Prowl like that though. Still, it's pretty good entertainment for a half-hour or so.