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schedule
July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't like the style you wrote this in. Personally, I think you have talent; just write in past tense. Not like you're RPing. :/
schedule
June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story it was soo good i printed it off and keep it as one of ny fave naughty stories. you should keep on writing k
schedule
March 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Two thumbs up! I think you should make sequels wit what they do afterwards and like pair up Numbah 5 and 2 or Numbah 1 and Lizzie..Just thought though Keep up the good work
schedule
February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh.. two ten year olds going at it?? lol.
Pretty discriptive, I like it.
Pretty discriptive, I like it.