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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, and I say contiue the stroy. Ja ne, for now.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad. Consedering what you had to work with, you did a great job. My only subjestions I can think of, is to dubble cheack your spelling, and give a little bet more detal, or as I like to put it, get more wordy. It is ys bys better to have too much, than to little. Well anyways. Great job. I hope to see more of your storys soon.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, could have been a little longer and you need to work on your spacing abit, but it was pretty good and I hope to see more.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS A GREAT STORY A LITTLE SHORT BUT U KNOW WAT THEY SAY QUALITY OVER QUANTITIY.
SO KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND WRITE MORE CHAPTERS.
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August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was good. could you please continue it with Alita being materialized?