rate_review Reviews

not bad...another chapter would be good,yeah

Not bad. Please continue.

I discovered this version of Choices by reading your ff.n profile, and I must say, I didn't think I could like this story any more than I already did - but I do. Rape is not an easy subject to cover with any sort of sensitivity or grace, but you've managed to do just that. Because I am incredibly disturbed, I'd actually wondered when reading the ff.n version why Mandark didn't take full advantage of the situation with DeeDee, and I guess now I know why. I am amazed as well that you managed to make both versions of her captivity equally believable. Very, very nicely done.
Also, I would like to read your fp.n story, but I do not know how to find it. When I manage to track it down I promise I'll review it. I'me ite it will be just as beautiful as the rest of your work.
One last thing - where's my pet monkey? -_~

Dun dun dun so what happens next?