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by jemstone5

schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent premise for a story.
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story this. Thanks for getting this far with it.
person Erick
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was so beautifully done, it's amazing. Please continue.
person Draconiansrock
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The long awaited chapter has come, and it is good! Excellent update, by far the best one yet! As for the doozy of a cliffhanger.....i dunno i already think its Scott who's there (he almost always is, the bastard!). In any case PLZ cnue,nue, i need more!
person Draconiansrock
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know i hate cliffhangers! Ah well......doesn't stop the fact of how good this update was, and how the relationship is progressing with the two lover! :) Plz continue the fic, i need more!
person Draconiansrock
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An Update've 've been waiting for a while and it definitely paid off! Excellent update! Only some small grammatical errors that i saw the main one being that "roomer" isn't spelled that way, it's spelled "rumor", and if u don't believe me u can look it up! :)
person Draconiansrock
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kinda wondering when u would update again........no prob though, my comp did the same to me not too long ago. But i still will be waiting on the next update, so by all means hurry! :)
person catscane
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story you should really update it thogh
person Draconiansrock
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update! Been waiting for this for a while now.....worth the wait by far though! Continue writing plz.....i'll be waiting for your next update!
person Draconiansrock
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Story! Hope to see more!.....Happy to be ur first review as well to such an obviously excellent writer. Plz continue the story!

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