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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic - interesting premise, excellent execution. I wonder if the girls have any clue as to Mojo Jojo's feelings for Bubbles? :)
You're really good at doing Mojo-speak, which is a good thing; it's the main part of distinguishing his character from just about anyone else in the PPG 'verse; that said, I felt that the Mo'linguish narration was a bit too much and kinda detracted from the story as the narrative flow was frequently slowed/interrupted. Just my opinion. :)
You're really good at doing Mojo-speak, which is a good thing; it's the main part of distinguishing his character from just about anyone else in the PPG 'verse; that said, I felt that the Mo'linguish narration was a bit too much and kinda detracted from the story as the narrative flow was frequently slowed/interrupted. Just my opinion. :)
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting but it stops when he saved the girl... Argh Cliffhangers! You are as bad as me!
Although I don't intentionally make clidffies unless they can sing 'Living Doll' *Note to Self........Clone Cliff Richards Mwahahahahaha*
I paitientllyu await more on this fiction
Although I don't intentionally make clidffies unless they can sing 'Living Doll' *Note to Self........Clone Cliff Richards Mwahahahahaha*
I paitientllyu await more on this fiction
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, look forward to the next chapter!