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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story it is really good. I did expect Tracy's Dad of bing a basterd but not the badguy until u gave the hint in the farm
hope u can udate soon the story is geting interesting.
hope u can udate soon the story is geting interesting.
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update the story please it's to good to end like that.
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on..where's the next chapter..I wanna see it...and I LOVED when James called M "the Floozy." AND DON'T YOU DARE STOP THIS IS TOO GOOD TO STOP
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December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chp 6 short? Not really. I see way shorter. The lenght was great for what you needed to gone.one. I look foreward to seeing the team bust scum up.
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL This was ummm.. weird but good. I hope the gun gift is somehow used in the story. I must admit despite what the father did, I wanna read more of this.
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Somestimes a little Drama and Plot building is good. So far I like what you have. Keep up the good work!