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Reviews for Never Meant to Be

By : Nightbloom
  • From gaiaoftheforest on February 29, 2008
    I know that not all stories end in happy endings, but this one kind of ended on an empty note. I felt like there was more that needed to be said, and it just died abruptly. Overall I liked the concept, although it was a little dark for my taste (Gary's constant homophobia was pissing me off, and how much they kind of threw Roberto to the sharks and crossed their fingers they could stitch him up). I liked the originality though, so bravo for that.
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  • From ShiTiger on May 30, 2007
    I really hope the two of them can stay together. Or maybe Puck can come up with a way to allow Roberto to turn gargoyle during the night or something. The lifespans are a bit difficult to figure out if they stay together. Great fic! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Xana on January 11, 2007
    Normally I'm not a fan of slash as far as gargoyes goes. But i've gotten sucked in by your story. I really hope to see it completed.

    The only review type thing i really have here, is a question, the gargoyles have perhensile tails... (for the most part anyhow) why doesn't brooklyn use his?
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  • From ANON - angela on November 03, 2006
    I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I has to be a dosey consider all the loose ends you have to tie up. I love how committed Roberto and Brooklyn are to each other despite the opposition they're getting form both sides. Thanks for the great read.
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  • From ANON - TreIII on October 19, 2006
    Ahhh, aff.net finally getting its act together (more or less), and me being able to read the latest chapter of this great fic? Awesome.

    Just a few things I thought were worth mentioning, just in case you didn't know already:

    According to Greg Weisman (series' creator), there are such things as "homosexual Gargoyles". Furthermore, while acceptance and other such nice things may or may not come, at least tolerance would be an overall norm, if it would make so that member of the clan would have a "soul mate" at last.

    So, in that light, Goliath flying a bit off the handle on the recent issue seems a bit off-base...was it merely because Brooklyn is infatuated with a human, or just the issue of his second being gay in the first place? You'd think a guy who emphasizes a lot of things about how "Gargoyle ways are not human ways" would at least have a different outlook on homosexuality than most humans do. ^^;

    But any way, I'll leave that up to you, the writer to tell the story. Hopefully we can look forward to the next chappy soon!
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on October 01, 2006
    Oh, wow, chapter14 was great. Please don't keep us waiting soooooo long for the next chapter. LOL. Again, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - libelle on June 16, 2006
    This was the very first gargoyles fanfic I ever read, and I just adore it! Now I'm disappointed by every other gargfanfic ,no matter which genre, while I'm desperately looking for more. I even love yor original charas, roberto and gary are so much fun. And it's got a really intriguing story, not just some lame excuse for another OC pairing. A staue whose powers are activated through sexual rituals..naughty..and fits so well with robertos seducing powers...I also liked the way you portrayed Owen/Puck, not to mention Brooklyn! The development of their relationship, so cute...and for the last three chapters, I've never read such a well written lemon(I think it's the first good one) and it's not just reduced to sex.You defenitely got it, I mean it's two different species and you make it work. Never would have thougt of such an idea before this story. I can't wait to see goliath's reaction. I'm obsessed with this story, read it all on one day and couldn't get away from the screen.

    Plainly what I want to say is: WRITE MORE! AND DO SO SOON!
    I'm craving for more
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  • From ANON - shuyin on February 09, 2006

    That was great but now i cant wait for the next chap!
    what will to the 2lovers now? will this get lee to keep the others from
    brooklin and others? man your so great at this hope you get the chap up!!(smiles)
    (prays for the gods to give speed) really cant wait(getting abit crazy) onegai qwickly
    no pressure of course
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  • From ANON - Timberwolf on January 31, 2006
    Oh, man this is great, when the next chapter, huh? Come on you can't leave us hanging like this. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - aurora on January 28, 2006
    OOOOOOH shit....at the end when everybody saw them I was like ohhh damn, but then you had to make it worst with the "traces of white fluid sliding down his legs".....I died laughing and almost didn't even come to that part I was so embarrassed for them......man it takes you a while to update, but when you do it's really good stuff....it's very rare for me to be reading and react physically to a story, but this made me do it and I love you for it.....made my night......the suspense is now killin' me BTW
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  • From ANON - angel on January 28, 2006
    Wonderful. Just wonderful. I not only love the way you protray Brooklyn but I also fell in love with your original character Roberto. I like the way Brooklyn can be sweet and innocent then strong, protective and beastly the next minute. And although Roberto is describe as looking rather efenimate and delicate he is still quite masculine. Now that the secret out I can't wait to hear everyone reaction. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - TreIII on September 29, 2005
    Great fic. I've been reading it intently over the last few nights, and with this latest chapter having been read by me, I thought I would finally give it a review. You captured the series characters really well, while also mixing in your own originals without cheesing it up.

    ...What's this? Quarrymen coming up to say "sup?" to Brooklyn? Hoo boy...Quarrymen always make the lives of Gargoyles "interesting", to say the least, right?
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  • From ANON - aurora on September 27, 2005
    I'm hangin in here with the story hehehe I have been reading it since you posted....I love it by the way.....the supernatural team are your creations huh pretty damn cool.....are you going to give them there own story or do they already have one....maybe something about the kid?......keep writing!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Amazon on September 11, 2005
    Yay! New chapters!! You left a huge-ass cliffhanger, you asshole. Now you must write more. Quickly. *chews nails* Please let Brook be okay....
    On the other hand, the last two chapters were hot. Write more smut! Whee!
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on March 14, 2005
    Hurry up already! What happens next! Yay, Brook got himself a little friend. Woo-hoo. And, oh no, umm... umm... R-somthing's being kidnapped! Don't worry R-something, I'm sure Brooklyn willl swoop in and beat the baddies! With the help of the other's of course! And what's R-something gonna say when he finds out Brody is really human-Brooklyn?
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