Reviews for Love Is In The AirBy : LordKuyohashi |
Just want to pass along what a wonder this fic has proven to be thus far. It's rare to see Simpsons smut that really nails the characterizations the way you have here - and I appreciate that not only have you taken the time to introduce a compelling long-term mystery (in terms of what's made all of Springfield unashamedly horny) but also a long-term end goal payoff target (in Lisa prodding Bart to build up his experience meter to satisfy their mutual end goal of bedding their mother).
I adore how base, simplistic and true to the character you've written Homer while still keeping him hilarious despite this over-hormonal backdrop. I love how obscenely perverted you've made Lisa while still conveying the nuance of having her initially hesitant to convey just how much of a deviant she is to her mother until Marge literally called her out on it while she played possum on the picnic table back in Chapter 2. Also, I appreciate the initiative to establish separate characterizations for Sherri and Terri despite the temptation of most to not present them as distinct individuals.
It's a bummer that I'm the first review despite all this time but I want to relay my encouragement to stick with this. You've got fans and avid readers - some of whom have even contributed regularly to this category - and we can't wait to see how you'll carry on this journey.
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