Reviews for Kindling the Ember

BY : Fanfictionfan360


  • From IttyBittySkitty on February 10, 2019

    You say you want honesty, so here is honesty

    this was tough to read. I get you don’t care about grammar or punctuation or anything like that, but it genuinely makes it near impossible to read or enjoy your stuff sometimes. I found myself re reading several parts just to try and understand what was happening, and that killed the flow. And it sucks, because I like that you’re going with this version of Danny Phantom where Ember is his friend/booty call

    ibts



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  • From Starship_King on February 08, 2019

    Pretty hot story, absolutely enjoyed reading it. Nice to see Ember getting it on with Sam and Danny, especially with her getting fucked by Danny and eating out Sam at the same time. Keep it up!



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  • From ImMyOwnOC on February 08, 2019

    Not quite how I expected that to end but it was still really good :p



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