Reviews for Grow, Adapt, Overcome.By : DebbieCync |
Uuuufff that was a close one! I was getting mad because I thought the author was pulling *it was a dream the whole time*.
That little not that this chapter was only and omake makes me want the real new chapter already!
So was it really all a dream, or is this omake not tied to the story itself?
Great story! Love these loudcest stories that are fun and innocent(and lewd). Looking forward to new chapters and/or any other works you do.
Thx for the Christmas present
Best Christmas present I got.
Now for another story I would love to read from you would be that
Lincoln wants to make love to Ronnie Ann but doesn't want to screw up their 1st time so he asks Lucy to help him out shes reluctant at 1st so he tells her it's the most forbidden thing you can do
You hit the nail on one of my fetishes and it great to see a new chapter up hope to see if more
That cliff cliff hanger though!!! Yo I have been loving your story, thx for updating it when get the chance, your awesome! Gonna put the fanboying to the side... So if Lynn, Lucy, and now Luan(givin recent events) does our scientist have it to or is that only passed through intercourse? And is the reason Lynn bent her needle because she's getting stronger because of the helix? Can they go to the doctor anymore without the risk of them finding out about there new change in dna!? Who else groaned out loud about the red Sea joke!? Keep on being awesome, this was great.
This is a review/comment for chapter 11
I like this chapter, but I just realized if Lisa has a secret underground lab then why doesn't she build one for Lincoln, to expand his room... though now I think the idea of him having an underground sex dungeon would make too much sense. On a separate note, I wonder if lucy will gain different powers than Lincoln, the name is "Grow, Adapt, Overcome" so it changing to give her different powers would make some sense, that and I would love the idea that she has powers that can let her disappear in shadows easier.
Ahhh, a wonderful chapter again dear author, my thanks and I kinda guessed Lincoln would have to do something like that to boost Luan's morale. I said it and seen it many times but I'll repeat it: I believe in Lisa's skills over diseases and bad dna.
And now Lisa has learned about how contagious Lincoln is and questions how, but it also brings up the new question "what next"? Will Lisa contain and freeze her siblings to solve the "problem"? Don't know the answer to that...
The anticipation is high, Lincoln is taking good care of his sisters and no one can argue that he doesn't love each and everyone of them and is just using them for sex...Sorry went into a rant for a second. This to me was a wonderful christmas resent and yes presents can be sexy and naughty for people who enjoy them, so thank you very much, I wish I could just express myself in a way to encourage you and rove how much your effort is appreciated.
Again THANK SO MUCH!!!
So that leaves Leni, Luna, Lola, and Lana for more fun (rubs hands) can't wait for who's next for the family plan.
That was equal parts delightful and cruel. Mostly the former, but that cliffhanger. More please.
Hah, now she knows what she did. Triple helix dna, Lisa you just made a new species! Thanks for the chapter.
Sorry for the late review, honestly thought i had previously had but I didn't, oops...
I greatly enjoyed the role play between them and the passion they and you put into it. Ahh, the Lucy and Lincoln love scene and yes I do mean LOVE, true they are having "relations" but they honestly love each other... And their siblings. Okay with me, cause now Lincoln is cuddling with Lucy and Lynn Jr at the same time. :)
So now the next question is how will Lincoln get his favorite comedian out of that blasted bed of hers and into his? Maybe a little help from his sisters or maybe the lure of good food? Or with the power of SCIENCE (mad scientist lol) and thank you for confirming some more details of Lincoln's change.
Plus the Lisa cuteness at the end of chapter made me smile, I can't wait for more, so MORE PLEASE!!!
Again thank you for a wonderful read and looking forward to more.
P.S. Any chance Carol Pingray can be Ahem "dragged" into some fun and a relationship with Lincoln? You know living with Lincoln while he "cares" for his sisters that live with him till they are "ready to leave"? Just an idea, but still I enjoy your story and keep up the great writing.
Lucy should have went with Lincoln impregnate me
I can't wait for Lana & Lola to have their turn with Lincoln
Loved it!
Waiting to see how Luan's chapter goes. I picture her being a squirter for some reason. Probably her prank squirting flower... i think weird stuff when it gets late.
Again, awesome job!
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