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By : ItwasMerlin
  • From ANON - Gambinoooo on May 26, 2022

    Hope you're having a great day Merlin, hope the next chapter is out soon, can't wait


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  • From ANON - on May 25, 2022

    We need that update 🙏🏽


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  • From ANON - Madoney on May 20, 2022

    Can you give an estimated date for the next chapter?


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  • From unclefester84 on May 20, 2022

    Well he did promisse that he would not approach Heather, but if she approached him...


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  • From ANON - on May 12, 2022

    Great update! I hope mildew goes back on that promise lol. Also, maybe at some point in the story, you can have him and Astrid spend a period of time alone together. 


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  • From ANON - Dragonite on May 09, 2022

    Amazing :)


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  • From ANON - Nathan on May 07, 2022

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  • From ANON - on May 06, 2022

    Brilliantly, I wonder what Mildew will do: listen to Astrid without touching Heather or, on the contrary, use his advantage and make Heather a sex slave.


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  • From ANON - on May 05, 2022

    Nice scene, even though it was not willingly, she still got off from riding Mildew. Making it one step closer until she finally submits. 

    Are you going to put in a Mildew and Heather sex scene? After making Astrid think he will uphold his end of the deal, he still goes and has sex with Heather.

    Have Heather do things he would want Astrid to do; suck him off, ride him, get filled up. And the best part, Astrid is standing outside when she saw Heather walking up to Mildew's hut. And instead of getting angry with Mildew for going back on the deal, she gets angry at Heather for taking what was her's. Then the next night; she goes back, not saying anything after Mildew opens the door, she pushes him to his bed, strips down nude, takes out his cock and rides him until morning. She keeps calling herself his "whore" or "slave", turning him on even more that he turns them until she is lying beneath him, but she is still enjoying what belongs to her. 


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  • From ANON - on May 05, 2022

    I say ASStrid is jealous that Heather could steal her spot...


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  • From ANON - on May 03, 2022

    Is Astrid finally going to break and willingly has sex with Mildew after he had sex with Heather? 
     

    Maybe do a scene where Mildew has sex and impregnates all of his new sex slaves. And they do it during a trip for half a week or a whole week in a house at another island, where it is very secluded 


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  • From ANON - on May 03, 2022

    Not bad, very good. Mildew has set a new goal for mastering Astrid's girlfriend. I am interested in this course of the narrative.


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  • From ANON - on May 01, 2022

    Oh heather's here? Yeah I'm gonna need that next chapter asap 


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  • From ANON - Dragon on May 01, 2022

    This chapter is interesting, I'm not one of those who want Mildew to fuck everyone, honestly I just want to see how things happen between Mildew and Astrid, and how the blonde lets herself be completely consumed by desire. Hopefully the next chapter will show us a bit of this jealousy of Astrid and how Mildew will take advantage of it to take her to bed once again.


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  • From ANON - Merlin on April 30, 2022

    Hi Paul- you can share on here or you can mail me at merlinitwas@gmail.com 

    I shouldn't really reply on reviews as they get a little annoyed but feel free either way 


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