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Reviews for Making the most out of a surprise

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From ANON - Ynk on April 06, 2016
    We have a guy who likes to fuck and a girl who's a big slut for rough shag and cocks... Perfect combo.
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  • From ANON - Edward on October 09, 2014
    Wow, everyone is asking for Jeremy here.

    OK, first, I want to say I find this story to be really, really hot. I like it more that the first story with Corbin.

    I love how you write Sissi, as a slut. Awesome.

    That being said, maybe is time to use other characters from Code Lyoko?

    I still want to see something with Yumi's brother. Heck, there was plenty of characters in Kadic.

    Keep the good work, Fanfictionfan.
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  • From ANON - ZTO on October 09, 2014
    Even though the reviewer pestering you about a Jeremie story comes as a little bit childish, he has a damn good point.

    You have been not only taking the easy way out by overusing Sam and neglecting Jeremie because "he's hard to write". You may have written yourself into a corner with that one due to the characterization you gave him trim the beginning, but I assume you were just too lazy to develop him properly. I'd also like to challenge you to get out of your comfort zone and write, not one, but Three Properly Punctuated Jeremie-centric stories without complaining in the middle of them.

    Another thing that's been bothering me (I know I'm going to get a lot of flak for this)... Self Inserts of your friends? In sexual action with canon characters? Really?! For a fanfic author, that's really low.

    You had so much potential. It's a shame to see it going to waste, so please, try to overcome yourself.
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  • From ANON - Jesus on October 08, 2014
    Screw you for not doing a Jeremy story you never give him any love any more. Please make your next story a long Jeremy lemon
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  • From ANON - Locke Lamora on October 08, 2014
    Great work as always, I do wish you could upload stories more often but I understand that life gets in the way. Anyways, I wish I could give a long detailed review as I usually do but I'm currently on my phone, (my computer being out of commission) so I'll just say this. No spelling or grammar errors that I noticed. Great worrying in general as always but of course, there's always room for improvement. Not much mind you but there's room.
    Wishing you well,
    Locke
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  • From ANON - NyteBlayde on October 08, 2014
    ⊙▽⊙ holy shit m8. Thanks for the story. You honestly do my oc justice. Can't wait for the next one.

    Cheers.

    -NyteBlayde
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  • From ANON - Guest on October 08, 2014
    Was really really hoping this was going be Jeremy story. Wish it was Jeremy story because he doesn't get easier to write for if you don't write more stories with him in them and heavily involved in the action. Until I see a Jeremy story I've got nothing to say but PUBLISH A JEREMY STORY AS YOUR NEXT STORY he doesn't get easier to write for if you only write for him once in a blue moon. I'm disappointed in your work as of late. I hope Jeremy is heavily involved in the next LYOKO story you publish. This story was way below your writing level. This is harsh but the truth you need to write for more challenging characters like Jeremy more often. When you publish a 10k+ Jeremy centered threesome with two other female characters I'll shut up. But until then I'm going to continue to critize your work because you can do better and you know it. Hope a Jeremy centered story comes out next.
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