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Reviews for The lodger

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From ANON - Guest on September 30, 2014
    Wish you would publish this stories more often and focus more on writing more of therm at a more frequent pace. And also writing stories that included people like Jeremy more heavily. I know this been said a lot but you need to challenge yourself as writer to write for harder characters like Jeremy more often. Until you do that you can never truly progress above your current level of writing. You do good work but to do great work you need to write for harder characters like Jeremy and have him heavily involved in the story if not centered around him. Please publish your next LYOKO story in the next two please. Also you probably know who I am and would just like to say until you do what I've said above I won't stop pestering you about not writing for Jeremy more often. Also there's no way for you to get ahold of me so the only way to silence me for good is to write a 10k+ words Jeremy centered threesome with two other female characters. If you write that and don't complain about in the story then I will shut up. But until then I'll keep on bugging u until u do. I'll check back next week to see if you published a new LYOKO story.
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  • From ANON - Lemonreader94 on July 29, 2014
    Good story dude !
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  • From ANON - Guest on July 29, 2014
    Great story. But disappointed it wasn't a Jeremy story. I liked reading it but really wish you did another Jeremy story instead of a Sam/Odd story. I feel like they and Ulrich/Yumi are easier to do stories for. I wish you did more Jeremy stories because practice makes perfect and of you wrote more Jeremy stories than it would be less of a challenge for you to write for him. Hate sounding like a broken record but I really really wish you would do more stories with Jeremy heavily involved in them. I hope the next LYOKO story you write is an over 5000 word Jeremy story because you haven't wrote for him in over 9 months and I'm going to keep pestering you about him until you start writing more stories with him heavily involved because I'm challenging you as an author to write a long story for a character that you find hard to write for. As an author you challenge yourself to write for the harder character and not take the easy way out and instead write for odd and Sam. I hope the next LYOKO story comes out in the next couple of weeks or in the next month. I would like to see a new one of these once a month. Otherwise good job on the story and hopefully the next one is a long Jeremy story
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  • From ANON - Locke Lamora on July 27, 2014
    As always, a great chapter in the ever growing collection. I do hope Corban and the other recently added characters appear in the next few chapters. Please keep the stories coming, they're great.

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  • From ANON - PizzaNinja on July 27, 2014
    Great story m8. You really do my oc justice. Can't wait for the next lemon.
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