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Reviews for Vivo o Rio part 5: the end of a perfect vacation

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From IttyBittySkitty on December 26, 2018

    Holy...fuck

    a full on fucking orgy

    girl on girl and the skimpiest outfits ever

    the fucking parade!!!

    Jesus it’s like Odysseus when he lands on the island of lotus eaters

    its all so perfect and wonderful that time melts away and all you want to do is stay there forever!

    please do something like this again!!!!

    oh, and Tell Sam I want copies of those recordings ;-3

    IttyBittyTittySkitty


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  • From ANON - PizzaNinja on May 29, 2014
    Great story m8. can't wait for another multichaper lemon.
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  • From ANON - Ayahime on December 09, 2013
    Hey, long time no see o/ I'll be straight... You have already made better. Really. OK, it was fun and all but... It sounded quite forced and overly messy. ._. I liked it but, I think you could make it better. Good luck o/
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  • From ANON - LemonReader94 on October 17, 2013
    Totally worth the way best lemon yet dude !! :) Maybe you should have Jeremy reactivate the supercomputer for a return to the past to enjoy the day with carla again ;) Although it probably won't happen, looking forward to next lemon ! :D
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  • From Jomahawk2694 on October 16, 2013
    You know, when this all started we had no idea you would drag it out this long or make it this intense. What started in April as a simple escape from the harsh cold truly did become an adventure. An adventure into the sexiest, most lust driven vacation that has ever happened. And you know what, to be honest there was no more perfect way for you to end this series. Now all thats left to do is go back to part one and read them all, front to back, and relive the vacation all over again ;-). Thank you so much for this, Fanfictionfan, and here's to even netter stories as time moves on.
    Your Number 1 Fans,
    Jomahawk2694 & Leaire (Nicole)
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  • From ANON - Master Doom Maker on October 16, 2013
    The perfect end to this story! I can't wait to see what you do next! When will Carla tell the guys that one of them is the father of her baby? :-) I'm kidding.

    So what do you goy planned next? Will you rewrite your old ones? I look forward to more. :-D
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  • From ImMyOwnOC on October 16, 2013
    Damn this was a long one

    And they sure we're gone for a LONG time XP
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  • From Hydra-Hunter on October 16, 2013
    Nice job and I cant wait to see what adventures these guys will go on.

    Also, mind letting me know HOW to get in contact with ya? Just asking.
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