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Reviews for Ben 10 - Falling

By : P_Darkwater
  • From ANON - Christopher on July 29, 2013
    Horrible ending to the story. It seems like you just got tired of the story and decided to do an 'everyone dies' ending.
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  • From Aysha on July 20, 2013
    I have to say that you have an interesting mind. You have taken aspects from several different sources and blended them into a seamless whole. This story is very dark under the surface but still manages to hold onto the light in both Ben and Gwen. I can totally see these characters taking this path in a less censored universe than man of action would allow.

    I think as a writer you have potential, though you need to work on your grammar and sentence structure.
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  • From ANON - Sam on June 13, 2013
    This is a great story.... The plot is great and I love the way Ben protects Gwen.
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  • From Aysha on June 12, 2013
    This is a gripping story. Your making the characters almost the exact opposite of what they are in the cartoon but somehow managing to make them feel like the same characters I have to applaud the skill that takes even though you could really use a beta.

    but please keep in mind that people do like happy ending and I'm not just talking about one where he cums all over Gwen. :p
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