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Reviews for Lawson Has His Fun

By : TimedWatcher
  • From ninesenshi on October 27, 2023

    Chap4, good to read more of this even if I didn't like the later plot.  Hope to read more...

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 02, 2019

    hey can I be in this story 

    cause I could stop lawson

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  • From ANON - nigger fag on October 25, 2018

    is good 

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  • From ANON - on September 03, 2018

    Posted on 4chan, but in case you didn't see it:


    First sentence
    >Whomping isn't a verb, it's an adjective did you even watch recess?

    >"Not so fast... Ashley." Lawson really bit into the fruit that was saying that name. "You still owe me one for that sock of marbles to the face." Furthering his point, he rubbed his fingers underneath his chin.
    Is english your second language?

    >Chapter 2 starts nowhere near chapter 1

    >For what Spinelli was about to do to a friend of hers, she talked in a very procedural manner. Lawson even looked impressed.
    Again, is english your second language?

    >Blast! This just wasn't working.
    Please stop

    >"That's how it normally smells..." Spinelli corrected. "You get used to it."
    I gotta say, good work here. This is very in character for Spinelli

    4/10, didn't cum

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  • From ANON - Aaron J on June 26, 2018

    I'd definitely recommend this read to any fans of the show. This author clearly knows the show very well; reading this felt like the actual characters were interacting which really pulls you into the story.

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  • From ninesenshi on September 05, 2016

    Glad to see another chap.  Hope to read more soon.

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  • From Matt01 on June 22, 2014
    You have a great idea in theory, but the execution makes it look bad. An idea is to take a step back and re-think this out and start again from scratch. This is an ok book, but you can do better then this, you really need to polish this a lot more to make this book work.

    I'm sorry for sounding harsh, but I have been reading books on here for years. You have some great potential, but this is not a book I would be proud of. If you want, your more then welcome to send me an email.
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  • From ANON - possom2009 on May 08, 2014
    Great fic! Are you going to continue it? Maybe add cornchip girl.
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  • From ANON - knightowl on November 15, 2013
    Is Lawson going to work his way thru the Ashley's and other female Recess Chars.
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  • From ANON - Toonspew on May 19, 2013
    Really liked this, and I hope you continue.
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  • From ANON - Alexander Martins on March 03, 2013
    This story was REALLY well made. I'm honestly impressed; - I definitely look forwards to more. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2013
    Hot and nasty story. Hope to see more chaps.
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