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Reviews for Night Trap

By : Cocomero
  • From ANON - Kensing on August 24, 2013
    Dafuq did I just read?
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  • From SkySan27 on December 26, 2012
    Is this a joke? Not to be a complete asshole, but if you're going to upload something so fucking short and it's not some kind of number of words challenge fic or something, then have some more chapters or some more words waiting in the wings, so there is at least something to read. I could barely get interested in this, with only 12, 13 if you include the same line being longer than any other, lines.

    There is no promise of awesome things to come. There is no enticing reason I should continue reading. It's very annoying to find fics like this.

    Now despite my possible harshness and assholeness, I'm not saying stop writing, nor would I suggest such things. I'm only going to say that next time, try giving the readers a bit more to read, or a few more chapters to draw them in. Only devoted followers of your writing would continue to read with the poor start you've given.
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