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Reviews for Dipper's Magic

By : MrPunch1
  • From ANON - Deathtron20000 on December 01, 2016

    Well this was a bit too rough for guy's first time. And makes to wonder just how much experience does Wendy have. But it is a great story, it is written skillfully and it gives a perfect picture, a very arousing one. Good job.


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  • From ANON - beast man on August 14, 2016

    loved it it was a very nice piece.


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  • From JulCan1987 on October 10, 2014
    Wow, this was pretty cool. Looking forward to seeing if you do a follow up.
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  • From andrewmyles on March 09, 2013
    Hi there, another anon from pco. As I said in the thread there, it is sad to see so little DipperxWendy fics, since most people focus on Pincenst. This is a very first one that I've read and it turned out not to be one huge paragraph of text, which sadly happens way to often in such fics.
    Now, to the story itself.
    It is well written and I quite enjoyed it. While the fic portraits Dipper almost exactly as in the show, mainly as an adventurous boy, who will take a challenge, it changes a bit personality of Wendy. Would she go all the way to seduce Dipper? There are a few hints in the fic that tells us it is really what she desires, and it's not just a side-effect of alcohol, and this kind of approach is what I've been looking for. Another question that raises is whether Wendy would be more skilled in the art of love-making? She is fifteen in the show, mind you.
    But in the end, all those questions don't really matter. We got a fine one-shot of Dipper finally fulfilling his dream. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
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  • From FairySlayer on December 16, 2012
    It's pretty sweet, very direct and very sexy. Giving the talismans and Dipper's "picture plus DNA sample" as an implied reason for her behavior was a good way to leave open the possibility she really wanted to do it with him anyway and it was mostly the picture that got her attention; yet things usually aren't that simple in real life. It wasn't clear at first why she got into a cleaning mood, even explaining that she only thought of things as either clean or dirty – no real middle ground – and maybe that prompted her to toss stuff and make the trash haul. It showed some agitation and annoyance, only for the bag to break, and her foul mood culminating when she told off and drove off the two-headed wolf.

    The comment to Dipper was a nice way to break that tension (though I can't remember which show/scene it's a reference to, but he's always freaking out so not surprising.) As for getting the kids to clean, either it was a continuation or an excuse to eventually get Dipper upstairs. Considering the kids' reaction I'm guessing the latter, but being a woman of mystery isn't a bad thing either. As for Mabel's specific reaction, I loved it, and Wendy's hint at one of Stan's adventures was funny too.

    At least she got him alone where they wouldn't be disturbed as she made her move; though it wasn't completely in the dark I'm sure the light was dim enough to be of the mood variety. I liked the idea of her setting up a nice comfortable love nest in the attic, even if it meant getting some mess on such rare and expensive furs. Grunkle Stan would be ticked off, though more that he forgot about them and could have sold them for a fortune. Not that I'm disappointed, but when she cut the ropes I thought they were going to be used as well, but no matter what there's no way he'd have tried to escape once she sprang her intentions. Plus she overpowered him easily enough, and nice way to get him to take a drink without wasting time with any protests. There begins how you kept the pace of the build up to sex moving along without skimping on the boy's natural reactions and anxieties.

    Poor Dipper at first, when she revealed the drawing she'd found, but only to make it clear she knew that he wanted it – again, no wasting time while he tries to deny it or something. Then she had him in her power, not that he minded one bit, and clearly he didn't care about any threat of failure because he was happy just to try. Warning about failing to get her off and redheads in general, yeah, didn't matter :) ; but her specific instructions on what and what not to do were terrific. Brief, clear, to the point, and so very right. ("DISCLAIMER: Individual women will vary." ;))

    Great descriptions of the oral and the tricks she threw in. Then it was very sweet how Dipper wanted his first time, and maybe especially with Wendy, to come inside of her pussy. Apparently he did well enough twice, and I'm glad that despite he couldn't have done it on his own Wendy forcibly made him push through the wall. Really make the most of their time.

    Most poignant of all was that Dipper would have been happy to only please her and, at the end of it all, was as happy with holding hands as he was by all the mad sex they'd just had. So even thought she'd made it clear that this wasn't love it was proof that she feels some real affection for him too.

    All put together, it'll keep his hopes up, if not other things as well.
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  • From BlueArrow on December 13, 2012
    This is one of the anons from pco, to be specific I was the one who wanted to know if there would be more. Anyway while I am by no means a literary critic I must say you've crafted quite the tale here. I mean to call it a one shot or pwp would be an insult, you had great descriptions, realistic sex, and the right amount of emotion to top it all off. I'll definitely be looking forward to anything else you write in the future
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