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Reviews for Incest Diaries

By : SubjectEnergy18
  • From ANON - jay on March 26, 2014
    Great story, I would love it if you could add more chapters, because out of all the zuko/azula fabric on this site this is the best!
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  • From ANON - JNVRedCat on March 04, 2014
    This is really good. Please come back and continue this
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  • From Rubythewitch on June 15, 2013
    when is the next chapter coming T_T
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 26, 2013
    I think you should keep Ursa out of the action and have her play a similar role to Ozai's in the first chapter: uninvolved comic relief. Like another reviewer said, you maintained the Avatar-type humor by making him so disengaged that he didn't even realize what was going on. Since Ursa walked in on them and knows what they're doing, she could be used for humor like Sokka, Katara, and Suki were. Just because they're in the story doesn't mean they're having sex with Zuko and Azula, but they add to it in their own way. I feel Ursa would be best used in this way, too. Stick with Jin. :)
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  • From Ryvius on March 25, 2013
    Has been an entertaining read so far.

    Would like to see more of Zuko/Azula/Jin and yes, Ursa would be an awesome addition.

    I personally like Mai, so it sucks she's out, but could we get Ty Lee on the action as well?

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From sheltiedg on March 23, 2013
    This is an interesting fic so far. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Rubythewitch on January 14, 2013
    i also agree with Lunaroki
    take it a little slower and add more details
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  • From Rubythewitch on January 14, 2013
    I really like how the story is going
    hope to see the next chapter soon

    also like to see jin, azula, and zuko in a threesome
    as well as a scene with Toph and/or ty lee

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  • From ANON - log on December 11, 2012
    this was so gooooooood. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - log on September 28, 2012
    please update soon! this was awesome!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2012
    FANTASTIC story would love to see another chapter!!!
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  • From Shaellin on June 30, 2012
    Not a bad story, especially for a first effort. It did seem a little short though. Certain details I would have like to see brought out were fluffed over, making the story feel rushed. During the main sex scene it was hard to picture what was going on with Azula's constant position changes. Don't be afraid to slow things down a little and give a little more attention to detail. It can really strengthen an already good story. There were also a couple of wall-of-text style paragraphs, especially near the beginning, that could have stood to be broken up into smaller chunks for easier readability.

    On the plus side Azuko is a hot pairing. Azula's rich girl craziness and Zuko's thinly buried frustration makes for an explosive mix, and the incest angle just makes it that much hotter. I would have liked to see the clashing aspects of their personalities and the reasons for their attraction to each other pointed up a little more but you still did creditable service to this potent pairing. I also loved the way you preserved the Avatar humor in the story. Having dad walk right in on them and not even notice his kids were fucking on the couch as he strolled obliviously right through the room was hilarious, and I loved Sokka's “You have to teach me that!”

    Overall a strong first showing. I'm looking forward to reading more from you two in the future! :)
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