Reviews for Dependents

BY : DancingBear


  • From ANON - devon king on March 24, 2016

    the switch between arnold to steven confused me.

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  • From ANON - me on September 09, 2014

    Thank you for not just making pointless smut.

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  • From ANON - Eli on June 16, 2013

    I'd almost forgotten what it was like to read a fic on here that was full of horribly worded slurs and unimaginative sex scenes. Then I saw this... God this is such a good fic. Beautifully writting, wonderful imagery, lovely storyline, adult content that doesn't make you want to gag... Not bashing other writers, but not everyone reads fics just for porn. I'm in love with everything about this story, but I think the gorgeous writing is what appealed to me most.
    Thanks!

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  • From ANON - Haywire_Hakaze on November 11, 2012

    Hoo, boy. I'm dying to know what happens next for this couple. Thought I could satisfy myself with reading your other stories-- also GREAT reads-- but now that I'm done I'm yearning for a new chapter here. :

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  • From KoKoa_B on June 22, 2012

    *Hair Pull* This story isn't finished?? LOL Seriously; another great Helga/Arnold. I really liked this one because it touched on a subject that I would have never thought that it would: domestic violence. I completely understand why Nina was so eerily calm about it all, though. As far as errors, they were very minor (there was a passage in either "Sink" or the chapter before where it should've been "breathe" and not "breath"). Being someone who types faster than she can think, it was understandable and didn't deter me away from reading more! Looking forward to seeing the conclusion of the Pataki-Shortman love affair, especially seeing what Nina thinks of him!

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  • From ten195 on June 06, 2012

    Loving this story. Keep it up!!!!

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