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Reviews for Heat

By : Aspergirl
  • From Aspergirl on September 27, 2011
    It is finished. I thought readers could envision a grisly continuation to suit their tastes. Thanks for reading.
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  • From RogueMudblood on September 24, 2011

    Even with the tag, I was not expecting the violence of that rape scene given the way you started the story with silliness between Red Menace and Voltar.

    You definitely shocked me with the dichotomy.

    I have a question though: you end the second chapter with Frogg about to exact is revenge on Dommageddon, yet you've marked the story complete. Were you planning on a continuation, or were you ending this in classic horror film style, leaving the gruesome details up to the reader? If the second, you certainly accomplished it.

    This was a well-written darkfic. Thank you for sharing.
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