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Reviews for Tricia Treat

By : JayDee
  • From pittwitch on October 29, 2010
    Oh wow -- oh my -- very interesting! Well done!
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  • From FairySlayer on October 28, 2010
    It's not a pairing I'd ever except, but it's a fun idea as Tricia secretly hopes and fantasizes about it. (Trying to imagine a full sex scene with him is a challenge, especially him in a romantic conversation or pillow talk.) You picked good examples for the show references since they were the more-memorable ones, plus making sure to mention Peter strengthened the tie to the show.

    I love the way she made sure to eat dinner keep to her normal routine before slowly working herself into the frenzied fantasy. Everything good is even better with a little anticipation. Carelessly dropping the wrapper on the kitchen floor was a good touch and showed how quickly her arousal was taking over. Thank goodness she had the presence of mind to close the curtains, which established that she is still aware of the line between reality and fantasy.

    And it's a descriptive fantasy that makes her feelings real to the reader. A hard candy dildo may have held up better and helped with the deep-throating part of her fantasy, but a chocolate cock is both safer and more appropriate, I suppose. :)

    So I'll throw out a pun and say that, especially for a flashfic, her fantasy was deliciously timed and very sexy. You made it exceptionally clear how much she enjoyed every bit of it.

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  • From ApolloImperium on October 27, 2010
    *stands in front of the AC* Daaaamn, that's hot!!! I sorta want a candy cock now...LOL!
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  • From Hypno009 on October 27, 2010
    Very good story. Good to see you're back. I have a few suggestions for a new story if you want to hear it.
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