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Reviews for Dark Mistress - Redux

By : fulwiz123
  • From ANON - alluringwords on October 05, 2011
    I was really surprised that after such a huge victory of disbanning the Middleton Pack that there wasn't a "celebration" - Kimmie sex style that is. Little sad about that. Through Chapter 12 and still no sex scene, closest naughty thing was Anne's medical examination on Bonita. Tisk Tisk.
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  • From SailorAF on September 17, 2010
    Simply awsome, I'm speechless.
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  • From Manofevil on September 16, 2010
    I CAN'T STAND IT ANYMORE!!! I'VE JUST GOT TO TELL YOU!!! I'm three chapters into a sequel to these stories of yours. It begins some time after the end of this one. Ron has been turned evil again and has captured most of the possible women and is torturing. He hasn't got them all for that you'd have to read the story to know. I love to coordinate my story with yours but as you still haven't posted any new chapters of your next part, I have no idea which direction you're going to go in. This and my other reviews should give you my email address. Let me know if you'd like to let me coordinate my story with yours. I'm not so presumptuous as to try and yank this storyline out from under you and who knows, you might even like what I've done so far so much you decide to let me do the next one for you. :)
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  • From RWO on September 07, 2010
    Oh now that's the perfect place to put a cliff hanger!
    I'm gonna be checking this thing like a maniac while awaiting the new 'book' of the story.
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  • From Bishonen on September 07, 2010
    I really hope part three dosen't take to long to come out i really want to see how this all turns out

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Soverayne on September 07, 2010
    Great Story. Been following all your stuff. Love it! I just hope this latest turn for Ron turns out to give him the backbone/support to be a proper rival to Kim. I love everything you write and give it highest praise but it seems with the pact gone and such that everything started going Kim's way too easily. Granted the latest chapter is a major setback but a sudden battle wound just doesn't have the same feel as an tried and true recurring antagonist. Ron is just such an idiot most of the time I'm just hoping what has happened to him pushes him into his rare moments of clarity...even if it is for the wrong reasons!

    Keep it up!
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  • From Manofevil on September 07, 2010
    Thank you for the ending. I've been waiting for Kim to get a little bit of it back. Counldn't happen to a nicer girl.
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  • From on September 06, 2010
    A good story, but again.... I have to bash on Kim using 'kill, kill, kill' as her solution to every problem and especially with her killing Motor Ed, who basically had done nothing to her since turning into a villian and giving Adrena Lynn to her mother as a 'test subject' (i.e. torture slave).
    With all due respect, this could SERIOUSLY backfire on Kim, if people start looking through the obvious and seeing what is underneath. Sure, people like Phred are MORE evil than Kim by justifying their actions with 'It's for people's own good!' however Kim is going down that road as well.
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  • From Wheelie91 on September 06, 2010
    Would you hury up with 'Demon Princess'?! I've now read both copies of The Middleton Pact and Dark Mistress and now I NEED to know what happens to Kim! You are an amazing writer!
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  • From 2CRsgt on September 02, 2010
    Pizza & orgy time!
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  • From Bishonen on September 02, 2010
    Really love this story and can't wait to seee what happens next don't have a lot else to say

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From 2CRsgt on August 31, 2010
    Olivia Porter, Vivian Porter's little sister I wonder if she will be joining the Possible Gang? After all she will bee close to the tweeb's age. I would imagine that Joss is good and ready to dump Ron for the clueless dupe he is.
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  • From Manofevil on August 31, 2010
    Man, my love/hate relationship with these stories grows by the day. Watching these characters have wild sexual parties is great. Watching them all turn into horror movie psycho killers is breaking my heart. Kim continues her degeneration into a remorseless butcher with noone capable of properly inducing the guilt or insecurity that was common in Kim's base character.(-unless you were perhaps to introduce an alternate universe, still good, Kim Possible in some way. Perhaps you intend to eventually. anyway-) There are still many different pieces of the Kimuniverse you could introduce. The attitudinator, for example. It might be interesting to see how Evil Ron would interact with the Possibles. He's the only one who ever scared Shego in any meaningful way and he was definitely more competetant than Kim's usual foes. He also seemed to be pretty good at making people suffer. Truth is, he might well be a match for Kim and co. Especially if maybe Nana Possible knew Kim would likely find and kill her and maybe put a recording device in place to record her doing it. Keep going.
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  • From 2CRsgt on August 30, 2010
    Now heros and villians will have to worry about country's boarders as well as passports and visas to enter said nations. They will also have to obay the law about any type of weapon carried. Now anyone in in the world can sue for damages and take them to court, there to be unmasked (for those who have secert identies (I know spelling).
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  • From Bishonen on August 30, 2010
    Whoa bunch of new chapter all at once really loveing this and Ron really is stupid anyway can't wait to see more.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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