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Reviews for Ice Cream Special, KND Style!

By : TheEvilFaery
  • From FairySlayer on July 20, 2010
    DISCLAIMER: I was the proofreader for this (back in January of 2009).

    This story is very sweet and yet so extremely hot as those two got to comfort each other so thoroughly. First it starts off deliberate and believable as Rachel tries to get some time to herself, and even better that sneaking off to make a big sundae is such "a kid thing" to do. Following her point of view and giving a few inside glimpses was a good start, but you left plenty for her and Numbuh 10 to reveal through dialogue and emoting. (That includes some very lovely and lively emoting as the story heated up.)

    Once Rachel was sated, or at least her tummy, I love the glimpses her mind as she comes to terms with her upcoming decommissioning. Then after Shirley's revelation about the naughty affair with Nigel it seemed like their shared grief over missing him brought them so close emotionally. That's terrific: Both of them were missing him and that helped them find each other.

    All of that lead perfectly into their sexual exploits, which were wonderfully teasing and awkward in a pre-teen sort of way. The action is supremely good, spiced up with a healthy mix of playfulness and naive innocence to make it all the more special for them. I was touched by Numbuh 10's assertion that Rachel will remember her even after her KND memories are erased. It's also deliciously naughty to think that Numbuh 10 will secretly be consorting with one of the teenagers soon. What a scandal, especially for the pretty and widely trusted KND news anchor! (Actually, any smart kid would use that information for blackmail, but kids...!)

    So, in other words, I loved it.
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