Reviews for Miss Pataki's Advanced Program for Special Girls

BY : The Evil Fairy

  • From ANON - hot shot on April 11, 2015

    Wow asome fic love it hope you make more chapters to t u isbone or other fic can't wait to see keep up the great work

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2013

    I still love this story!

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  • From Fairy-Slayer on August 12, 2012

    That's a sweet little tale of concealed lust and debauchery among the brightest and most popular girls. No matter how smart she is, there are just some things a girl can only learn from a very special mentor. Definitely something sweet for the foot fans to enjoy without it dominating from the down 'n dirty deeds. All of it is nice imagery and very playful until Lila's button is pushed and she loses control; nice to see that she showed her gratitude so lovingly (if a bit too carefully at first perhaps) upon coming down off the afterglow.

    Something about Lila's ambivalence when it comes to dirty talk makes it so much more dirty and intriguing. For someone who's always so prim and proper, always in control, maybe letting go of that corner of her mental behavior is such a shock to her psyche that it makes it impossible for her to deny her other desires... or at least an "explanation" to herself should she ever feel a bit guilty about it.

    The "final advice" to Helga at the end was beautiful: upon re-reading (now years later) it makes me wonder if Lila is starting to get tingly for the tsundere younger Pataki girl instead of just giving herself a little sexual thrill that just happens to sound like venting at the same time.

    (But if the sweeter girls ever tried to get Helga involved the dirty talk would probably come much too easily, never mind Ol' Betsy and the Five Avengers.)

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  • From marcos on October 16, 2010

    Im glad to see your work here as well!

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