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Reviews for Ben and Julie's Lemony Days

By : Freakgamer
  • From TigroSpottystripes on June 11, 2010
    How about some stretching with humongosaur, then hug a cock and be used to masturbate it, and finish with a swim in a Godzilla's worth of cum puddle?

    Oh, and since he's reptilian-like, give'im a hemipenis! :D
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  • From magic713 on May 05, 2010
    Sweet. I luv your story. Each one has something different to add on. Plz continue.
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  • From mike226 on January 13, 2010
    Very nice use of Ghostfreak. Good to see this updated again.
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  • From mike226 on November 25, 2009
    This is going great so far but maybe you could have the new alien (from Alien Swarm) make an appearance?
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  • From rayzak131990 on November 06, 2009
    heh, interesting. its alright.
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  • From megadeth425 on October 15, 2009
    It's decent for a beginner's work, but you're pretty rough around the edges. First, your punctuation is iffy in a lot of places; sometimes commas aren't there or are in the place of semicolons. Also, you could use some work on adding description to the words themselves and finding ways to start paragraphs without using their name. There's a part in chapter one where you see "Julie" start off three consecutive paragraphs, and it sort of pulled me out of the story.
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