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Reviews for A Night With Royalty

By : DatMurph
  • From RyuaAlba on September 14, 2010
    That was incredibly hot. And I was exceptionally pleased to see the boys willing to play with each other. That's something that I can never find enough of in orgy fics. Thank you so much for writing this.
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  • From Kataangfanficer on August 06, 2010
    *faints*

    That was amazing!

    I'd love to watch Zuko and Mai "play" with Aang. ;)
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  • From morgman2 on March 17, 2010
    I know it's rude to send a message via the reviews page but I'm new to this site and know no other way to contact you. Besides, you can freely erase this once you have read it.
    I took your advice and edited my story 'Honey I Shrunk the Avatar' and I would value your opinion on how it appears now. I paid special care to the paragraph layout (double spacing and so forth) and fixed up my grammar.
    As to one of your other 'Cons', I don't really want to change Suki's reaction to Sokka supposed betrayal. I went out with a red head for 5 years and I can tell you the rumors are true, they do have fiery tempers.
    And yes, there will be a sequal to this one called 'Beauty and the Beast' mainly featuring Azula in her new role as the 'Blood Goddess' and an OC, the AntiAvatar. It's still very much a work in progress but I should start posting the first chapters for it soon.
    See ya
    Morgman
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  • From morgman2 on March 16, 2010
    I felt one good review deserves another but I only hope I can give a review as concise and intelligent as the one you gave my 'Honey' story.
    Spelling, grammar and paragraph layout were perfect. This story had a professionally written feel to it which is what makes it so good to read.
    The story itself was incredible. I'm a big fan of the original pairings (Zuko/Mai, Katara/Aang) and reading of their little foursome was quite the turn on. I liked how the boys had a little Bi action along with the girls and I especially liked miss 'Insatiable' Katara. And Aang getting 'Carnal' advise from the other Avatars was brilliant, sometimes I wish I had his little water chakra blocking technique.
    All in all, beautifully done and I'm looking forward to reading your other story.
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  • From silksashes on August 05, 2009
    Wow, this is very hot so far. Oddly enough, I've never read a moresome fic with these four, but I am getting very much into it!
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  • From Seviper on August 05, 2009
    Fuck yes about time you posted this here.
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