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By : Ingsoc
  • From kagomeisawsome26 on January 25, 2011
    interesting all i can say
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  • From Kayin on August 21, 2009
    Not a bad story. You should work on fleshing out the details to make it longer though. Running this one through spell check would help a little too. I honestly think Connie will become more intimate with Bobby once they go through puberty. What fun that'll be!
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  • From RadiumEyes on July 27, 2009
    How do you spell Souphanousinphone correct, but misspell "cheek"? ._.'

    Anyway, you definitely need to continue, this was waaay too short.
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  • From FRANCISCO on May 29, 2009
    Good story but it feels rushed. The ending is specially abrupt. Perhaps a longer more detailed rewrite would make it better.
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