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By : AloofandAndrogynous
  • From QuaqueNocte on March 18, 2015
    I so want a sequel to this. Great job.
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  • From Kataangfanficer on July 22, 2010
    Another masterpiece! I always pictured Combustion Man being quite...large. ;)
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  • From johnordan on January 25, 2009
    Really interesting, one of your better works for sure.
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  • From ANON - Kurojin on January 23, 2009
    Well, Aloof...Androgynous you've done it again. You are definetly the Empress of Crack. You hold dominion over all things crack related. Good thing too because I always know that I can get my fix from you. lol I never thought of seeing Combustion Man in a pairing. It works soo well. How can a burly 7'2" pyrokinetic assassin not be awesome. This stroy was great. I loved your interpretation of him, he seemed very much how I would imagine him, silence included. I also like Kataras spirit and spunk. I think u have a very special way of bringing out the characters and who they are. Your writing captures and holds the reader. So descriptive and it flows wonderfully. One of my fave parts was at the end how Katara behaves once help arrives. I've read every story you've posted here (except for 1-2 of the yaoi/yuri ones) and I love them all. You make my day with your updates, I always feel so excited upon seeing ur name under a title. Have you thought of a bit of Xin Fu action? Maybe Xin and Katara or Toph... or even Xin/Katara/Toph O.O wowzers lol. Haru doesnt get used very often. Heck I wouldnt even mind to see the Cabbage Man, I konw you could make it good hehe. You could write about a rock copulating with a leaf and I'm sure it would be superb lol. Sorry if any of my 'review' seems over the top. I've read you since like 05 or before and have never reviewed u_u . I guess its repressed praise spewing forth. Unfortunately I'm not a critic so my 'review' can't be more thorough focusing on more literary aspects of your writing. But I can say that I feel all the components that make up your story make it excellent, you nail it completly. I love your writings. Anyway I've very excited for the sequel to this piece (hint, hint...nudge, nudge... come on man XD). I'd love it if this was continued ;). Maybe we can hear Combustion Man actually speak next time :D. I'm sure I left out most of what I originally wanted to say (probably why I dont review more, my words always escape me). I'm gonna go and re-read Hunter's Delights. Thanks for the stimulating story.
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  • From luna26 on January 22, 2009
    Wow unusual pairing..but oddly it works...are you going to continue the tale with him following the team to the air temple? Great work as always
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  • From ANON - papapapuffy on January 21, 2009
    I really hope for more!!
    awesome work!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 20, 2009
    *fans self* that was freaking great! I loved this two shot, so very nice.
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  • From ANON - Jhondie on January 20, 2009
    Oh... yes. I just came. (smokes a cigarette)
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  • From BCStorm on January 19, 2009
    YUUUUUUUUUUS About tiiiiime
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 17, 2009
    Damn but this is so freaking hot, I love rereading this. I love how you make the 'conversation' flow between them and discriptions of how big and muscley his is great. I'm picturing him bouncing her in his lap, but I'm eager to see where you are going with this. I love her thoughts on how Sokka never gets kidnapped, very funny.
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  • From ANON - papapapuffy on January 16, 2009
    I actually didn't think I would like it as much as I did
    update soon
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  • From Seviper on January 15, 2009
    I like it. You have a great sense of description and the kind of language that makes a story erotic in the first place. Which is more than what can be said for many adult fanfiction authors. Though I kind of had a problem with this one because it's hard to imagine Sparky Sparky Boom Man as a sexual being, and you seemed to characterize him as something resembling a stereotypical porn manga villain. But I understand that there's probably no other way to make him hot otherwise, I know I can't think of one. I've really loved your other stories though.

    But, I gotta be honest with you. I was looking forward to your next story and when you finally posted I was rather disappointed that it featured Katara again. Okay, so maybe she's your favorite character and you find her hot, ain't nothing wrong with that. But you're an erotic author, and you've got a lot of talent. It would really be great if you expanded your repertoire and worked on some of the other female characters. What about Toph? Or Suki? And the FN girls are practically begging to be put in porn fanfic.

    Chocolate may be delicious, but eat too much of it and you'll still get sick.
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  • From ANON - an on January 14, 2009
    A very nice fic if you take request's i would like to request a Mai/Katara one-shot set after season 3.
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  • From AloofandAndrogynous on January 14, 2009
    Anon, come back and flame me all you want, I WILL delete every single review you leave. You apparently don't know the meaning of concrit.
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on January 13, 2009
    I freaking love this! What a great pairing. You're doing an amazing job and this is really quite hot.
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