Reviews for Naked Playthings: A PREQUEL TO BART THE RIPPER

BY : Jeffrey Opstik


  • From ANON - BixsGirl on October 04, 2013

    With only minimal typos this story enthralls the reader. The misfortune lies in having already read the two "Ripper" stories, then finding this unfinished prequel. We see Bart's desire unfolding and his discovery of his mother's past before she married Homer. How this confuses Bart and shapes his future actions, however unjustifiable they may be. Lisa is awakening to puberty and her own desires here. Marge should definitely invest in Caller ID and assertiveness training classes. But instead she allows herself to be drawn into the seamy underworld she earlier abandoned. Would certainly like this story to continue. I would add to it myself if I believed I could do it justice.

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  • From Jeffrey Opstik on April 08, 2009

    Is it Moe? Maybe....

    More chapters to come. I'm releasing the stories about Marge, Lisa and Bart as separate chapters now. The next will be in a day or two.

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  • From KikiNina on April 02, 2009

    That obscene phone caller ... is that Moe?!

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  • From Jeffrey Opstik on December 02, 2008

    The story this is a prequel to is located at this address...http://cartoon.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600040729
    I didn't write it, JayDee did.

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  • From Stoned Reviewer on December 02, 2008

    Great story dude!

    I can't find your story Bart the Ripper though, can you put it back up so I can see the one this is a prequel too?

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