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Reviews for Invader Zim and the DNA Virus of Doom

By : dashofdaniel
  • From ANON - BloodsuckingmonsterFAM on January 30, 2011
    MORE, PLEASE????????????!!!!!!!!!!1
    *rolls around on floor, frothing at the mouth and shooting laser beams from eyes*

    Oooooooooooooh, what's Dib gonna turn into, oh, PLEASE tell!!!!!!!!!!!?????????
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  • From gothickun on December 02, 2008
    Gah! I can't believe you're not gonna continue this. For something that's been lost for a year or so, it is good. I wish I could add to this, but I am not as talented as I believe I am, so...I'll leave it up to someone else. Toodles!
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  • From tamasama on October 16, 2008
    Yiff in hell, furfag!
    lol, I'm just kidding.
    Anyway, this story is alright, and I'm liking the idea of furries. I love furries. There are some issues with it, though. First of all, if Gir is a dog, why can't he stand the taste of meat? Dogs are canivores, so they love meat. All they eat is meat (well, in the wild anyway). Second, you didn't go into HOW Zim got infected very much. In fact, you didn't go into much detail about ANYTHING. This kinda seems more like a story outline than an actual story.

    I liked the intro, I can definatly say. I think it was well written and quite enjoyable to read. But on to a few more issues.... The mentions of Nickelodeon and Vasquez are cool, if this story were a parody. But if its not, then they're a little inapropriet. And one more thing.... How did the virus get out? Is it airborne or something? I'm not sure if you were planning on explaining that in greater detail later, but I'm just curious.

    Well, all in all, this is a good and origional idea that I hope you will work to its full potential, and I'll give it a few more chapters before I decide whether or not to move on with my life. So yeah, I'll keep reading, and if you take a few of my simple suggestions to heart, I'm sure this story could be a gem.

    *Wanders away*
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