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Reviews for Kingdom of War

By : Jayrich
  • From ANON - Jimmy on June 30, 2012
    This is an excellent story and an excellent current chapter.

    I especially like your take on toph and her interactions with sokka are flat out hilarious.

    Hope to see more of the story soon.

    Jimmy.
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  • From ANON - GAOliver22 on June 27, 2012
    Awesome series, please write more. And as a personal request, if you can some how add yue that would be awesome. Also a lemon with ty lee, suki and toph would be epic. I love how sokka got back his sword. And how he came up with the idea of searching the prison. And nice name for the prison by the way. The cactus, is awesome. The whole story is awesome. By the way, sokka fan. And toph fan too. I liked how toph beet lo and how she can now see in the desert. She met kyoshi and I was flat out happy. The brillance of this story is beyond me. Thank you for writing it and please continue.
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  • From ANON - Matthew B on June 07, 2011
    Amazing. The story is engaging and keeps me interested. There are some portions I find do not fit with the Avatar canon but thankfully they do not go so far as to become a serious occurrence. Explanations of each fight are easy to understand and do not over elaborate every single move a character makes. Sex scenes are top notch but may need some elaboration on the position of each character.
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  • From ANON - un named on June 06, 2011
    Love the update. but could you add a love seen for Aang and Katrra (bad spelling)
    Hope to hear from you soon
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  • From Rudolfs0807 on July 24, 2010
    this is a very well written story. although in the sex scene the words you used were rather... vulgar for lack of a better word. other than that very good. was that a bleach reference i caught at the beginning? "Gooood morning Ichigo?"
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  • From Shinzochi on January 30, 2010
    hey Jayrich, that was an AWESOME chapter and quite the cliff hanger there. (^_^) I am looking VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY forward to the next chapter. (^_^) (^_^)
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  • From Zarrthtion on November 24, 2009
    wonderful just wonderful you have to writ more i love this fic and i must say a nice azula is creepy but funny
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  • From Shinzochi on July 09, 2009
    Jayrich that was AWESOME and i think the most HILARIOUS paragraph i have read in your stories yet. (^_^) i look UNBELIEVABLY forward to reading the next chapter. (^_^)
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  • From Shinzochi on June 09, 2009
    Jayrich, this is certainly one of the MOST INTERESTING, FUNNIEST, and HOTTEST stories i have EVER READ, and i am looking VERY VERY VERY forward to the next chapter. (^_^)
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  • From ANON - LisaFan on June 09, 2009
    Simply amazing story!
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  • From ANON - the bayinet bleeder on May 10, 2009
    I like what your doing with the story.
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  • From ANON - kkorl on March 14, 2009
    i really like this story.
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  • From ANON - watch this on March 06, 2009
    I just simply love your work.
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  • From ANON - Horel on February 12, 2009
    I enjoyed this avatar story.You have great imaganation for stories.
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  • From ANON - Hands of stone on December 31, 2008
    fun chapter
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