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Reviews for Capax Infiniti

By : IJX
  • From LuciferDragon on December 10, 2010
    Absolutely loved it. I don't care if this is old or not, you must get the plot bunnies to start nibbling at your brain again for this. I want to know what's happened to Jex :D
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  • From DawnNoir on April 20, 2010
    Wow! Just wow!

    I sure wish you would continue this story. Your skill in storytelling is professional as well as fascinating. And I sure would like to know how Zim will deal with his conflicting emotions as well as the complications they mean to his mission.

    DD
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  • From Rockinmuffin on January 01, 2009
    This is truly a magnificent, beautiful piece.

    Honestly, it's hard to find well-written, intellectually-stimulating stories on a site created for the main purpose of smut, especially in the Invader Zim section. You, my dear, and this story of yours, are the exception. Everything you have written was very well-thought-out, interesting enough to keep my attention, and sensual. Nothing in the story that occurs seems rushed because you provide so much sexual tension before anything naughty takes place.

    The characters are also quite brilliant. Your OC is an intelligent woman who is very much aware of her limitations and weaknesses yet she doesn't throw herself a pity party or brood more than any other person put in her situation would. It could be said that Zim is out of character but that can easily be brushed aside as a sign of maturity over the past 15 years, plenty of time for him to evaluate himself and learn from his past mistakes. Really though, the only out-of-character quality he possesses is a greater intellect than he had in the show, a little bit of angst here and there, but the reactions you give him are ten times more realistic than the personality he has within the cartoon since his sole purpose was to be ridiculous and make kids laugh. So, in this case, OOCness is good; you made it work and not many people can say that.

    I enjoy the dynamic between GIR and Jex; while most people would have their fan-characters instantly get along with him due to his cuteness and the fact that he's one of the most popular and loved characters of the series, you made Jex's reaction to his behavior realistic. As cute as GIR is, I doubt people would find him quite as cute if they were the ones that had to deal with his constant nonsense rather than watching him annoy others from a safe distance.

    I really do like the story you're developing here. I'm curious to find out why Zim's scent is so familiar to your OC. And then, a lot of questions were raised in my mind when Zim asked Jex if she wanted to live. It certainly makes one wonder what was going on within the Irken's mind when he asked that. Really, I love how you emphasize the importance of the psychology of the situation, putting an emphasis on the mind and the emotions rather than focusing solely on the physical aspect of the relationship as most fics on this site are prone to do.

    All of that aside, the smut scene itself was sensual and well-written; it aroused both the body and the mind. I like your interpretation of how Zim is able to be intimate; too many people simply would give him a human anatomy and leave it at that because that is what is most familiar. You, however, went the extra mile and thought of a way for Zim to be intimate without duct-taping male genetailia to his crotch.

    This was a wonderful read and I hope that you choose to continue with this story. I'm dying to see what happens next, not to mention this is one of the best stories I've read on this site and without a doubt my favorite out of the entire Invader Zim section. Five out of five stars.

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  • From PixiMe on June 26, 2008
    Ah, I keep comming back to this. Your style is so addicting, keep it up ^^
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  • From gothickun on June 05, 2008
    What, what, what! o.o

    I must say, you're good. Very good. VERY!

    I love your story. I want more. Here's to hoping for more chapters.
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  • From zuzuyak on June 03, 2008
    Great story so far, you do a good job with capturing Zim's personality. Look forward to reading more!
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