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Reviews for Can Fire melt? Ask the Earth

By : SSjJaden
  • From Anvildude on September 25, 2008
    I'm still liking your story. There's a good balance of sex and adventure, and plenty of romance to tie the two together. Though I am sad that Sokka didn't get to take down Combustion man. You seem fixated on Zuko, and while I know that it is his story, and I'm okay with him being the only lightningbender (what happened Azula!?), I think you're making him a little too powerful, a little too perfect. I would have liked seeing him in a little trouble from the Ravagers, and maybe having Toph or some of the others help him out a bit more than you had. Still, thos're just the gripes of a fanboy. Great story, and keep up the good work!
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  • From Anvildude on September 19, 2008
    I really like this story so far. You have the phrasing of a master storyteller, and all the characters are very realistic, in all the scenes. One thing, you seem to spell 'speak' as 'speek' a lot. Great story though, keep it up!
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  • From on July 02, 2008
    That was awesome
    Loved the ending
    Loved the Katara/Iroh momment
    I love the Katara/Azula pairing. It's so unique...


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  • From SunTsuToriden on June 04, 2008
    This is one of the all time greatest stories I have ever read... ever!

    You are like, simply amazing.

    This story... I can't find the words, but it's good, trust me!
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  • From zutoph on May 26, 2008
    I enjoyed this chapter. The lemon wasn't as detailed as some, and part of me liked that. Still quite a few spelling and grammar errors, but a good read.
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  • From zutoph on May 23, 2008
    Spelling was a little worse in this chapter, but I loved the action. Excellent plot!
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  • From zutoph on May 20, 2008
    I am a little confused by the ending, but I will just wait patiently for the next chapter. Good chapter overall. :)
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  • From on May 17, 2008
    A wonderful story that gets better and better with each chapter you write, but there is one knock I have on it: the formatting. For some reason, some of the chapters are formatted in a weird way, or are not displaying correctly.
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  • From zutoph on May 17, 2008
    Nice. I really liked this chapter. Not as many spelling errors, or at least I didn't notice them. I really like the way this story is headed.
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  • From zutoph on May 11, 2008
    Thanks for the additions. There were a few spelling & grammar errors, but not bad. Overall a good read. : )
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  • From zutoph on May 10, 2008
    Awesome addition. Still a few spelling mistakes, but overall it was an excellent chapter. Toph can see. Zuko still doesn't know how to speak to girls, lol. Love it!! : )
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  • From zutoph on May 03, 2008
    Excellent update. I like the part where he sent the vial of meds to Toph. That was a nice gesture. Can't wait for the next update. =D
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  • From zutoph on May 01, 2008
    Nice update with chapter 4. It feels goof for Toph to be thinking about Zuko. The only thing I noticed was that there were a few spelling errors throughout the story, but they did not detract my attention from the plot.
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  • From zutoph on April 29, 2008
    Excellent so far. Hope you do well with yur finals, and update as soon as possible! :)
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