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Reviews for Lonely Nights

By : esn1g
  • From DMajorBoss on June 07, 2009
    Personally, I feel that you could easily be a writer for the Sonic the Hedgehog comics. If only you were a part of the gaming staff, we may be able to get some good games created in this day and age (maybe one fully based on the comic adventures).

    As always, you do a swell job with capturing the mood of Knothole and the personality of the characters. I give you extra props for being able to keep up with Bunnie's accent throughout the whole story; it's one thing to talk as such, but it can be quite a predicament to actually write in such a manner. You do so well with your use of scenery and imagery throughout this piece, and you give depth to the characters in the common feelings that they have but may not share outright within their community. You also kept in some funny moments in this piece and, just for the sake of it, I do remember when her stomach itself was within the tone of a light fuchsia before it was changed (personally, I still like to think that it is naturally that color, seeing as how it was how she looked before the semi-roboticization). Nevertheless, it was a fun read that encompassed delightful moments of openness and alluring sexual mention. And, to add again, I like how you kept it to where Bunnie does still have her lower parts; if she can keep her tail, why not that one particular area as well?

    All started, developed, climaxed, and ended splendidly in this creation, and it's such an honor and pleasure to have bore witness to well written fiction. Honestly, with your level of depth in the series, you could honestly work within the corporation itself. Thank you very much for taking the time to write such a splendid story. May you have great fortune upon all of your creative endeavors.
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