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Reviews for Azula's Lost Chapters OR Azula's New Cook

By : DecieverGod
  • From ANON - Emily on March 30, 2011
    I haven't finished this yet, but I really like your OC. Normally I'm a giant Tyzula fan and can't see her with anyone else, but this works!

    That would be really cool if someone drew a picture of them. Not that I'm offering. I'm a terrible artist.

    Can't wait till I reach the end.
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  • From ANON - >.< on August 05, 2010
    This is never going to be updated again won't it? *sigh*
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  • From modeac on August 07, 2009
    Brilliant story! Not easy to imagine where Azulas and Tatsuyas lives are going to go in your version of Book 3. One thing i have to comment on is that Captain random being boss of the Dai Li is actually the first real affect to canon he has made.
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  • From ANON - SomeGuy on May 20, 2009
    COME OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
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  • From ANON - Jordan on April 21, 2009
    I love this story first found it start of last year and never got round too finishing it. Read the first 3 chapters last year and the rest over last Week, God Azula my favourite character in the series its just that she just so... EVIL! So, wonderfully evil.

    As the Dai Lee Stated to Long Fang "she so inspiring & frighting at the same time!"

    And I loved the Ember Island chapter of the show wherer she states too Ty Lee how she's jealousy of how boys just fall all over her shows at heart she really is just a teenage girl (who just happens too flirt poorly due too her life as the Fire Nation Princess, me thinks she needs too spend more time in the court and a little less in the war room... lol).

    But I digress.

    At the start of the story I wasn't too found of the way you pro traded her but as the story processed I was glade too see how in character you kept her.

    Almost forgot too say something bout our fave Captain... You've or should I say because of how you had Azula ask bout his past in chapter 15 and his sudden realisation of great truth in chapter('s) 28 to 30 has completely broken his mind. I can't wait too see how you play this out in the next chapter('s) of his shell shocked mind and the title the Dai Lee gave him Berserker was just the icing on the cake.

    Once again I can't wait for the next chapter. Would you mind giving me a Buzz with its up!

    Keep up the great work.

    Don't let Azula be too hard on him.

    As much as I would love too see them get together in the end of your fan fiction. I love more too see them torn apart, makes it more realistic that way. After all Azula is still no matter what the Princess of the Fire Nation and it is the duty of the royal class too marry for power and or, peace. Sad as it can be it is truly rear is it for her class to marry out of love.
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  • From ANON - Dudebroman on April 06, 2009
    Need my fix already.
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  • From WildWestSamurai on March 08, 2009
    Well, I haven't reviewed in awhile.

    Anyways, after the first sex chapter, it seemed like the story and your writing was getting sloppy and a bit rushed for a little while, but then you upturned everything and set things back on track as soon as the Ba Sing Se chapters came around. Azula, love your analysis of her character and her conundrum of caring for another person; Tatsuya, I'm finding his character weakening, but I'm sure you'll firmly resolve that, too.

    Keep up the great work. ^^
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  • From flamehead23a on December 03, 2008
    wow... aside from grammar and punctuation mistakes, this is very, very good. you've captured Azula very well, better than I think i've seen anyone do before. you've given me a lot of good ideas, as to what she was like during the war, for my own story. the sex scene was great, classy and descriptive without begin overtly vulgar. keep it up, and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Ky on November 23, 2008
    It took me two days to read it but I think this is a great story. Although, some parts were long winded, it is still great. Please continue on I will be reading
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  • From mortarius on October 02, 2008
    A wonderful story! You have successfully created an in character, totally believable relationship for Azula (no mean feat) while resisting the impulse to overdo any smut. I would love to see more of this story continuing into book 3 (and beyond if it can still work). Also your in-depth understanding and knowledge of the show and it's characters has produced a fan-fiction that very much achieves that holy grail of fanfickery: writing something that reads like the original. Bravo! Well Done!

    now back to work! :D
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  • From ANON - orran_ainmire on August 24, 2008
    Honestly, I think you should extend it into Book Three. The process and enormous effort required would seem daunting to many, but I believe you have the ability to succeed. I'm also interested in how you would weave your OC into the plot while simultaneously keeping the alternate story of azula. It'd be a real treat to read such a work. Though, if you want to move onto other things, you can always end at Book Two. Either way, I'll certainly keep reading.
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  • From Granite on August 23, 2008
    This is a great story even if it is Azula-centric(not my favorite character). I will be looking for more!
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  • From on August 14, 2008
    Amazing
    Spent the last 3 days reading it, every now and then.
    I love this story and you have to keep going till the end of the series.
    I'd love ot see how Tatsu will handle crazy Azula.... or if he'll even still be around.
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  • From WildWestSamurai on August 13, 2008
    Analysis: I'll have to agree with Azula that Ty Lee's teasing is annoying, but my other half finds it humorous and true to character. Splendidly done. Mai's characterization is perfect as well.

    What I find interesting, though, is how Azula and Tastu will either continue or break this relationship. Which brings me to my answer to your question.

    It's entirely dependent on you as to whether to continue on to Book 3 or not, but you have to consider how Tatsu, a lowly soldier not yet retired, could possibly travel to the Fire Nation in Book 3. Maybe he becomes a war hero in his own right at Ba Sing Se and this helps Azula's plans with furthering a relationship with him or something. Personally, if it's no trouble to you, I would love to see this extended to Book 3. All I know is that as long as you maintain the sheer quality of this work, I'll love whichever decision you go with.
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  • From jaxlax21 on August 13, 2008
    Once again a good chapter, I can't wait for another sex scene. But you should totally go into Book 3. I would especially love to se what she does with him while she is going crazy.
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