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Reviews for Vilgax's Plan

By : brood
  • From ANON - Linda~san on April 01, 2011
    There has to be a sequel!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2009
    please update soon
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  • From wasup8322 on December 10, 2008
    should continue the story
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  • From DavidSMOTPOKER on February 14, 2008
    PLEASE UPDATE!
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  • From Cowboy2k8 on February 11, 2008
    Cool story. please write more soon
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  • From azurarose on December 21, 2007
    very interesting story. I very much hope there will be more.
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  • From on December 16, 2007
    Great story, but it still needs more chapters.
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  • From on October 16, 2007
    Ooooooh..... I think I am beginning to see where this story is headed, and I LIKE where it is headed, definitely! I think that Ben is going to be the one doing the 'fertilizing' and Gwen is going to be pregnant with little Ben's.
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  • From writer33 on October 03, 2007
    i have read your story and it is very good i hope you update agian soon
    p.s i hope ben does do gwen and well i hope he become a daddy.
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  • From Bishonen on September 24, 2007
    other than just a tiny bit of bad grammar in a few spots and short chapter this is great hope the next chapter is up before to long.

    With Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From on September 20, 2007
    Gwen is hot for her age. I love the story so far, keep it up :)
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  • From writer33 on September 20, 2007
    it is very good hope to read the next chapter soon.
    i hope gwen does do ben.
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  • From GhostwriterMO on September 12, 2007
    A very good start. I don't think Vilgax deserves any good times with Gwen so I seriously hope that Ben does rescue Gwen and then... huh. I don't know, Heatblast roasting Vilgax's tentacles, Diamond Head cercomcizing him? Wild Mutt ripping off said parts, Cannonbolt thunder rolling vilgax in the reproductive system? Heck even Eyeguy giving vilgax an eye full. And then oh boy I hope that Ben's alien form isn't in heat. Cause I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From DALV on September 12, 2007
    Sweet! Great start! can't wait to read more!!
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  • From on September 11, 2007
    I'm liking the premise of this story a lot. Vilgax trying to impregnate Gwen is something that I have thought about MANY times, because she is a hottie and a half.
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