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By : WritersBlock81
  • From jupmod on August 25, 2007
    Actually, Kratohoa is not in Italy. It's a island in Indonisha (Southeast Asia) that sits between the main lands of Java and Samatra. It erupted in 1883 with such force equal to thousands atomic bombs. Brush up on your history better before putting them in any fics. ;)
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  • From Liahm on May 16, 2007
    love the story spelling need a bit of work but
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  • From Horatius314 on May 11, 2007
    Wow. It took me two days to read this. And all I can say is... Wow. My only suggestions would be to listen to your spelling and grammar checker and then break this up into chapters. Aside from the little errors, it was a really good story. Wow.
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  • From Jarkota on April 28, 2007
    Not too bad at all; as Zaratan said, spelling/grammar needs work, but other than that, it was most enjoyable. I see I'm not the only author here that likes the ide of Ron having his own personal harem (though yours is more extreme than mind in the bondage area, but to each his own). I do hope you decide to continue this.
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  • From Bonniefan on April 27, 2007
    Well now, it's not often you see something like this here, this was practically a novel. Grammer and spelling were off quite a bit, but not enough that I didn't enjoy the story itself. Excellent work overall.
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