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Reviews for Zuko's Betrayal

By : CaptATKirk
  • From on August 30, 2008
    i tried the search on DA, but i can't find it. help?
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  • From ANON - Lourve ThiS on July 21, 2008
    Not a good story but a GREAT story and considering how you pieced it together, like different point of views from different characters? That style usually annoys the ever loving crap out of me because it can cause a plot to become uneven and choppy, but you really weaved it nicely (hehe I said weave) and you did something even better which was you added a new detail with each character perogative switch-really slick.

    Now that I'm throughly addicted could you e-mail me the rest, I scanned Deviant Art and I came up empty handed.

    Coco_chanel420@hotmail.com-oh and Ignore mrs. Novice above me she doesn't know what she's talking about it, putting the deviant art message in a chapter was a good thing because it gave me a heads up- and hey if it even helped one person {and I'm sure it helped more than just me} then you can say with certainty that it was worth it. Thanks again for writing such good work!


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  • From ANON - Novicegirl on July 19, 2008
    Okay posting the first bit of information was okay I guess but doing it again and also making it a chapter is too much. You could have put this information as an edit and made a note to those who were interested in your title with stars or something eye catching.
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  • From on July 19, 2008
    Awesome
    But I can't find it on DevianArt.

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  • From ANON - venturion on June 29, 2008
    good story very well developed plot. Looking forward to the rest of it =D
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  • From ANON - avatargirl92007 on June 28, 2008
    this is a fantastic story!! It's very well written! hope you continue to update!!!
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  • From RoseINTJ5 on December 15, 2007
    Ok this story really annoyed me. I was initially hooked on it and you even got me to hate Katara (who is actually my fave character), but I don't like how her character was always yelling at Lan and calling her a bitch when she was the one who betrayed her friend and enjoyed fucking her friend's husband. And nobody defended Lan or got mad at Katara for doing this or for shooting her water whip at Lan. Lan's character should have been pitied and Katara should have been hated, instead of Lan being hated and Zuko being pitied. And WTF was up with the wierd threesome and lesbian sex when the three of them were supposed to be solving their problems? And Katara shouldn't have been bitching at Lan everytime she got sad or upset- I would be upset if my best friend was fucking my husband the day after I left, and Katara had no right to seduce Zuko and then get mad at Lan for being angry. And what's up with no one feeling sorry for Lan even after all she's been through? Nobody even thanked her for healing Katara. And "innocent" little Katara has Aang pussy whipped in this story, even though she was being a bitch and taunting Lan by saying that Zucko liked her "tight body" better. (I know it's only a story, but I really got into it- I just got fed up after that awful threesome).
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  • From ANON - jonest on August 16, 2007
    This Story is getting better and better but try to add more Kataang scenes, by the way you should'nt have cut Aang out of that threesome

    P.S Did you steal that line about the two dragons from Pathfinder?
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  • From ANON - Gerri on May 19, 2007
    Thought I recognozed the Bloody Queen from Celtic Myth. Love your take on the 300
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  • From ANON - Jason on May 03, 2007
    Interesting, keep it going
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  • From ANON - spartanearthbender on April 15, 2007
    very nice adaption of the movie "300". keep it up!

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