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Reviews for It all comes in three

By : tantecarla
  • From Shaellin on September 10, 2007
    Just got around to reading The Trail We Blaze part 3. Hadn't even realized it was up! Funny that I got to beta read Wall of Ice first. Nice job with both chapters. :)
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  • From Shaellin on June 07, 2007
    Oooo, nifty! I love the whole Guardian Sphinx thing and seeing Icy and Stormy struggle to solve its riddle. The way Icy finally solved it felt like it was right out of the show too! The 'meanwhile back in Baltor's room' thing was a nice touch too. ;)
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  • From eltf177 on June 05, 2007
    Another great chapter, please keep them coming!
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  • From MegFallow on April 12, 2007
    Yay! A sex story about Baltor, he is so hot!
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  • From Shaellin on April 03, 2007
    Well you know I'm lovin' it! Icy/Darcy is one of my absolute favorite Winx pairings! =) The fact that you're sticking with the original Italian version in which they are actual sisters just makes it even hotter! It was a real pleasure to beta this story for you and I eagerly await the next installment. ^_^
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  • From eltf177 on April 01, 2007
    Very good story so far. Looking forward to what Icy's got planned...
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  • From tantecarla on March 29, 2007
    Thx :D I appreciate it :) I hope to get at least one chapter up before the end of the weekend. Next week is a very busy week at work :( So I'd barely be able to write :( (And I have three chaps in my head dying to get out)
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  • From Shaellin on March 28, 2007
    No need for that. I just copied the story right off of here and I'll email it to you directly when I'm done fixing it up. I have a few questions I'll need to ask you but I'l email you about those.
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  • From tantecarla on March 27, 2007
    "Personally, I get the feeling that it would take a little more than that to get Stormy going. I've always felt that Stormy has trust issues, especially when it comes to something as intimate as sex" - Funny, I've always felt the same about her here XD

    But I didn't feel like food play at this time :p so I ditched the bowl. Maybe on his next visit? ;)

    I'd like it if you were to correct my story :) should I upload it in the group then or how are we going to do this?

    And thx for the comments :)
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  • From Shaellin on March 26, 2007
    Very nice, although you missed the obvious potential for food play. I mean, chocolate mousse? That is so begging to be licked off of something. ;)

    Personally, I get the feeling that it would take a little more than that to get Stormy going. I've always felt that Stormy has trust issues, especially when it comes to something as intimate as sex. Still, nicely written. I loved how she bumped her head in the fridge when Baltor surprised her. :D The way she behaved in bed definitely sounds like her! I love how she made him wait until he said she was his main witch before letting him enter her, and how Baltor was willing to tell her anything she wanted to hear to get there. And it was so funny how she kicked him out after she was done with him! XD

    I still say you could use a beta to clean up your stories a little. You've got the wrong word in a number of places, the kind of mistake a spell-ckecker won't catch. Mind if I clean this up a little bit and send it back to you so you can see the difference a good beta can make?
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  • From tantecarla on March 26, 2007
    Hehe Episode 12 was surely one of my faves XD

    Those three fighting for beeing noticed. She might not be my fave of the three, but I really loved Darcy in this one ;) I died when I saw Darcy's expression when Stormy went to 'Try out her new powers' and Icy 'Had to do something'

    And it also killed me when Darcy said they were fighting over a guy when Icy responded 'Yuck! You're right'

    XD Anyway expect the next chap soon ;) I don't kno yet how soon but still...

    Greets
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  • From tantecarla on March 24, 2007
    I've seen it in Italian and it's promising :) but I don't think Baltor will be very pleased with them once they return XD I think some punishing is due when he has them turned back to normal. I'm gonna say no more since some people might not have yet seen it and spoilers ...
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  • From Shaellin on March 23, 2007
    My, you have been a busy bee Carla! ^_^ This promises to be a fun storyline. Nice to see Darcy getting a "head". ;) Your work could use a beta to clean up technical issues, but overall it's good. As for who's next, maybe tomorrow morning's episode will give you some inspiration in that department.
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