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Reviews for Lustful thoughts

By : gaaramonster
  • From ladieaj on February 02, 2008
    The story is good, but I think you'd benefit from an editor or a beta reader; someone to point out and fix grammatical mistakes. It would make the whole thing a lot easier to read.
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  • From FaceSmasher on January 29, 2007
    Good fanfic. I like how they don't just go right into it.
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