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Reviews for Irken Courtship

By : Melidona
  • From darkdagers on September 19, 2010
    OMG i love this i can't wait for more!
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  • From LoneHowler on June 03, 2007
    I would hate to see this fic left unfinished, please update
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  • From lilbutterfly on January 18, 2007
    awsomeness!
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on January 06, 2007
    well this is cute
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  • From ANON - EasterOfFlesh on January 04, 2007
    "Things only mated Irkens got to do"? *SQUEAL* I can't wait for Dib to wake up! Don't give up on this fic, okay?
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  • From ANON - kumagorokun690 on December 26, 2006
    zomg u updated yay *dances like crazy*
    ooh Zim dreaming of mating stuff XD
    that would make an interesting intro to the next chapter :3
    cant wait for ur next update ^-^
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  • From ANON - dreamfool on December 22, 2006
    hurry and update. must see what happens
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  • From ANON - E on December 09, 2006
    Hurry I must know what happens!

    -Does a little Zim stand.-
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  • From ANON - Keri on December 09, 2006
    >3< OMG! I love this story! And, funyn enough, there IS football player at my school like that guy. Heh, funny world huh. ANd I thought Zim's computer was a boy PX eh, oh well.
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  • From ANON - Hazel on December 07, 2006
    Pretty good. Interesting story line but your vocab still needs a little work. Iunderstand about the hybrids but I'm not sure exactly what Laila (Fanchar?) was talking about. Also, she said that she would add ahealing solution to the 'toxin' which doesn't really follow, because a toxis in inherently dangerous. It's like saying you would add a healing solution to a poison.
    Also, the Jock who likes Dib, he's a good character and could evolve a lot, however, his lines are a little unrealistic. That's one of the hardest parts about writing, so don't get down about it. It's just that, if you read his lines, no one really talks like that. Also, when you like osmeone and want to fuck them, usually stabbing is not the first thing a person goes for.
    Looking forward to the next chapter
    _hazel
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  • From savemesatan on November 29, 2006
    Wow.I am in love withthis story so far!!! I hope that you find time to post more. I love the concept, and the plot line is great so far! Luvllez! ~Lydia~
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  • From ANON - Koea on November 29, 2006
    Great story so far! More please!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2006
    Sounds good! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Ru Shin on November 26, 2006
    I loved that! It was awesome. :D

    You're in need of a beta, however. There are a few spelling and grammatical mistakes, I'd be happy to do that if you'd like.

    Also, here's all the info you'll need for bolding and whatnot: http://resource.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600005245
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  • From ANON - EasterOfFlesh on November 26, 2006
    Ooooo! Looks promising, so update soon, yes? *SHINE* :D
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