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Reviews for Fuseki

By : Katalyst
  • From ANON - I_M_Hunter on July 04, 2014
    Wow, really invigorating story!

    I found myself really interested in the characters, their relationships and even the Zuko/Aang bits despite the fact I usually avoid those stories. Not homophobic just not my kettle of fish.

    I think you really have a talent for writing.

    Looking forward to more chapters


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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2010
    Oh gosh I absolutely fell in love with this story I love it and it's amazing I realllly hope there's more soon the anticipation is killing me!
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  • From ANON - Renai85 on February 22, 2010
    Hi, i love the story when will you go on with other chapters
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  • From ANON - Nag Hamadi on December 27, 2009
    Hmmm....

    this is shaping up very nicely.

    Interesting take on things though your chapters seem to be getting shorter and more narrow as they shift to focusing primarily on the relationship between characters. Have the world they're in intrude again or set them up with in once more (like the dinner) with meetings, perhaps to view a show of swordsmenship or soudatsu (martial arts contest -with real weapons-)

    Though things are taking place in Fire Country exclusively, what of the of the Earth Kingdom territories (ignoring Ba Hsing Se) which are ruled by "kings" or generals in charge of the army, or the Water Tribe living at either polar cap ? Unless of course you bring them all to the capital..

    Whatever happens, I hope to see more soon.

    4/5
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  • From avixK7 on September 21, 2007
    I'm loving it so far. Azula's slow seduction and manipulation is loads of fun :)

    It's been a while since you updated but PLEASE finish it! :)
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  • From ANON - Julie Parsons on January 06, 2007
    I really like this story... have Azula win and make katara her bitch...
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  • From ANON - yensid3443 on November 07, 2006
    great fic please continue

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  • From ANON - Jimi's Little Wing on October 23, 2006
    you know, as much as i hate to admit it, i really like this story. you've got azula's character down personally - i can really believe it. the aang/zuko thing is eh, and zuko's a little soft for me, but otherwise good work... keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - J on October 18, 2006
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2006
    ahhh why did you make Aang gay? I mean I knew Zuko probably is, but why Aang?

    Still good story though...
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2006
    Please continue when you can. This is really good, you capture Azula's personality perfectly. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kim on October 04, 2006
    totally amazing. i can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - kadaj34242 on October 03, 2006
    great fic!

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  • From ANON - Jyuami on October 01, 2006
    very good chapter! i loved how azula was just there when katara was waterbending, and just walked away. the make-up scene was written wonderfully ^__^ the tension and annoyance katara was feeling was so vivid, it was beautiful. the way you are focusing on the subtle details is really great. i look forward to the next update :D
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  • From ANON - Jyuami on October 01, 2006
    enjoyed the flow of this chapter. it had great potential. there are not too many azula fics, so this caught my eye. the observation of the avatar and friends were well done, it is a cunning mind at work indeed :D
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