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Reviews for Turn the Pages of Life

By : JdWheels
  • From Aysha on May 15, 2020

      Firstly let me say that I really enjoyed this story!  I loved how it developed the whole way through! 

     

      That being I am not the type to blow smoke up anyone's behind.  So prepare yourself for my next paragraph!

     

      Your writing is atrocious!  Your grammar is some of the worst I have ever seen! No joke! 

      You have a good mind for writing all your need is the education to go along with it and you could become a great writer.   Please seek out that education and become the phenomenal writer I you can be!


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  • From Sabbs on June 04, 2009
    Love the story hope you write more about the weekenders. :)
    Sabbs
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  • From RWO on June 18, 2008
    Yea, like the third time i've read this.
    a good story, very good.
    And, the sequel, could you finnish it please?
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  • From Sabbs on May 07, 2008
    Great work! Picking the Weekenders as your story subjects was the best thing here...thanks. Keep up the great work . Hope to see more of your writings. :)
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  • From on September 27, 2007
    You, Sir, are one of the greatest writers of whom I have had the immense pleasure of reading stories. I feel like this story could grow much more. I greatly look forward to reading more of your stories.
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  • From Hint on May 18, 2007
    Very nice..how about in the next one the girls relise they love each otehr as much as they both love Tino? Could be very intresting*wink*
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  • From brainic2004 on April 30, 2007
    great stories man i hope you write the sequal to this.
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  • From Thesus on December 05, 2006
    I approve. Not too much weekenders stuff here. Moar, please.
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  • From ANON - .... on November 23, 2006
    this is a good story please update
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  • From ANON - fogu-s_tofu (NLI) on September 14, 2006
    Awesome, don't see too much weekenders stuff. Lemme know when you update please. Fry_Company@yahoo.com
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