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By : Morgoth22
  • From Jawelik on September 09, 2006
    Very nice. Well written, well thought out, and I just love slave stories. Especially ones that feature dominant women, like the Mistress. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Be sure to email me when its done.

    -Jawelik
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  • From ANON - SM on September 09, 2006
    I have to admit that this is getting something of an emotional response from me. I really want to see Ron swoop in to save the girls and discover who is behind this terrible conspiracy. Poor Shego... I too would nt have expected her to end up this way.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 08, 2006
    YOW!! Somehow, I don't think Ron going berserk on these people would be a bad thing at all! Poor Shego... This just keeps getting more and more interesting... Laters.
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  • From Bonniefan on September 08, 2006
    You know, I thought based on the evidence, it was Shego who was looking to buy them. I guess this throws that theory out the window!

    Eagerly awaiting more!
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 07, 2006
    Okay, not what I expected, but intersting all the same. But can Ron and Wade reach them in time?! I await the next chapter! Laters.
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  • From ANON - SM on September 06, 2006
    Somehow I figured that Kim had to be a special order of some kind. It is also interesting to see people like Porter and Yori there. Quite the mystery developing... I appreciate how fast you've updated this.
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  • From ANON - Kothoga on September 06, 2006
    Great chapter 3, eagerly waiting for more chapters of this story
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  • From ANON - Troomer on September 06, 2006
    Did you even try to proofread this? I didn't think it was that intriguing to begin with, but this second chapter is too incoherent for me to even finish it.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on September 06, 2006
    I imagine Wade'll be the first to figure out what's going on, but how can Ron save them? Can't wait to see what you have in mind! Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2006
    The premise for this story is quite interesting and overall, this looks like an excellent start: this piece has some solid potential. I'm definitely curious to see where things go, but before I get my hopes up, let's see if the author continues and eventually concludes this--as we've seen, these stories are, all too often, abandoned.
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  • From ANON - SM on September 05, 2006
    That's a very intriguing beginning. The premise is a good marriage of adventure and adult situations. This looks quite good.
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  • From ANON - lanter1984 on September 05, 2006
    I like how it starts, but where's the rest of it?
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