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Reviews for Feel It!

By : Gunwild
  • From ANON - a fan on January 22, 2010
    mr. gunwild, you are to erotic literature as to what gunsmoke4 is to porn. absoultly wonderous.
    p.s. would love to see more tokka, my prefered ship.
    p.s.s. keep up the good work
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  • From eyecanread on April 12, 2009
    This is an excellent story. You did an excellent job on characterizations. Loved it!
    Also: "After all, he didn’t need underwear when she was around." Is my favorite line from this story.

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  • From ANON - facepaint on February 02, 2009
    this really is one of my favorite stories.
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  • From TheColeTrain on June 21, 2008
    Wow, now that's a story.
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  • From SunTsuToriden on June 05, 2008
    OH... MY... GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is like the greatest, smuttiest, Tokka-est story I have ever or am likely ever to read! AND I LOVED EVERY SINGLE WORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You = SuperGeniusKing!
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  • From Herhand01 on December 29, 2007
    Masterfully done! Best Toph+Sokka fanfic I've had the pleasure to read.
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  • From ANON - Taang4vr on November 11, 2007
    Wow! So far, this has been one of the best lemon fics I've read! The characters are mostly IC (though I don't recall Toph ever doing a victory dance before) and the plot dosen't get in the way of smex. Most excellent, and I've read more than few fic, both on AFF and other sites! Keep it up, and looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - I Come Anon(ymously) on September 27, 2007
    First, allow me to say that this is one of-if not the-best Avatar fics I've had the pleasure of reading. ...Even if it is pedo. heh. Down to business then. I have only two complaints with this story, one minor and one more of an annoyance. Firstly, while the story is overall well written, I tend to nit-pick. There were a few spelling errors, but nothing a beta wouldn't be able to catch. Thankfully, there were no grammatical errors, such as poor sentence structure, word misuse, and the like. As far as getting the thoughts you try to convey across, you do a marvelous job. Secondly: in chapter five, Toph make the observervation of Sokka and Katara being black. This is possibly (more than a little likely, actually) incorrect. While they are dark skinned, they are not negroid. If anything, I'd say they and their tribe most closely resemble the Inuit or Eskimo ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inuit ). From my own observation of the series, NONE of the characters I've seen cross the screen could really pass for what, in the anime style (or the anime-esque style Avatar uses), a black person. Hell, spotting someone that looks white (caucasian) as opposed to asian (mongoloid) of some kind is pretty damn difficult. I'm not pointing this out to make racist comments or somesuch nonsense, far from it, rather just making an observation. ...If I were going to do that, I'd say something like "besides, it's too COLD where they are for them to be black! If they came from Kyoshi maybe..." THAT would be racist. Like I said, it's more of a annoyance than anything that detracts from the story and absolutely be corrected.
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  • From ANON - Bren on May 06, 2007
    not bad
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  • From Alcaloid on April 14, 2007
    Man, you are a genious for finding such an elegant way for them to be alone. That lovemaking scene is one of the best I've ver read, and the ending was funny and cute. Can we fav stories and authors around here? This fic is a rare diamond in a sea of zircons.
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  • From Alcaloid on April 14, 2007
    From the show I got the feeling Toph favored direct approaches, so I really liked how she breaks it off to Sokka. It was cute how they mock-insulted each other (is that from the show or did you come up with all that?). As I pointed out earlier, I was unsure about this fic because of the loli, but you made the lovemaking scene sweet because you make it clear that there is love between them, and love has it's own mind. I liked how Sokka is careful with her, and how she finally takes the initiative.
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  • From Alcaloid on April 14, 2007
    The sign of a well-rounded story, you give credible reactions to your characters and go beyond the sex to their emotions. The dream scene was beautiful. I never would have paired Toph and Sokka myself, but you make it all seem believable.
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  • From Alcaloid on April 14, 2007
    I pretty much gave up on fanfiction as a whole because of the crappiness of most fics. Many 'adult' fics seem to have been written by kids who haven't even jacked off yet, but you are reconciling me with this artform. You write really well, giving enough so I can get a clear mental picture of what's going on while avoiding encumbering the story. That whole scene where Toph asks Katara's advice is actually very sweet and totally credible. I was unsure about reading a fic with loli, but you made the masturbation scene look natural and -once again- sweet.
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  • From Alcaloid on April 14, 2007
    I just recently became addicted to Avatar, so as far as I can tell the characters are easily recognizable. Can't blame Sokka there, a guy has needs (I can rerlate to that) and you depicted incredibly well his feelings. I liked the guy from the first episode my girlfriend coerced me into watching, and I like the way you render him here. Long story short, I was looking for this story after seeing a fanartabout it by Karek at the shoujoai hentai forum, while I was researching more info about the show. Found Karek at Devianart and fortunately there was a link to your fic. Love it so far.
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  • From TimKai on April 03, 2007
    I find it hard to get into fanfiction. I have tried to slog through the bowels of ff.net, and fichaven, but I have to flee in terror. Even knowing several "Good" fics, as suggested by a female friend, I just can't do it. Basically, all the fics I read are located on AFF.net, in the avatar section, so my choices are limited. I took a Chance with Feel It!

    I need to learn to take a few more chances, because this one lead to brilliant dividends.

    Honestly, Toph has gotten the short end of the stick when it comes to fics devoted to her, adult or not. Well, all right, I guess since I only read the fics here, ADULT is all I know, but, well . . . SHUT UP!

    I have enjoyed, and expect to continue to enjoy, this fic (or else). Keep up the good work (OR ELSE!). I guess I couldn't keep the joking aside.
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