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Reviews for Senior Witch goes to Earth

By : tantecarla
  • From Shaellin on July 19, 2006
    An interesting story. Had a few technical problems though. There were a number of places where you put in the wrong word, like "fell" instead of "felt" or "lied" instead of "laid". As far as characterization went, it was a little off. Darcy and Stromy weren't nearly angry enough about Icy blowing them off like that. Darcy should at least have been a little put off by that and Stormy should have just about thrown a fit. Remember, they just got kicked out of Cloud Tower an episode or two before and they placed the blame for that squarely on Bloom and her friends. As for Icy, way off character for her to want to help Bloom feel better.

    All things considered though, it was a pretty good PWP. Despite the occassional technical glitch and the slightly off characterization it was fairly well written and it was interesting to see those two arch-enemies getting it on for a night of hot lesbian sex. I give it 4 out of 5 stars and hope to see more stories in this vein from you in the future. ^_^
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